I'm loving this story, poor Greg...Keep writing, please!

OMG I feel so sorry for Greg, everything seems to fall apart.
How can Nick be so stupid? gosh, he deserves a slap!

Can't wait for more ;D

You really think we get rid of cancer by snapping fingers? Seriously?

Great story...but please don't let Greg die! :( Sorry, just me just being selfish. Keep writing, I can't wait to find out what happens to poor Greggo.

Wow.. what an ending! GAH! Must read more! Now! Fantastic update though... Wish NIck would just tell him already! But then we wouldn't have a story I suppose, would we? lol. Looking forward to more...

Oh no, please let Greg live! I'm begging you. Great update!

aah yes you didn't kill him :D But Greg has cancer? wow, i'll hope he will survive that too! Poor greggo's going though so much.
Great update!

Poor Greg, what a lucky guy! Though it seems a little bit too much :p

Apart from that some mistakes you should check or consider taking a beta. It's always good to have someone taking a look at the story! Second, the edit is a little compact...

I hope Nick's gonna stop being a coward and help get through that! Good chapter! Update soon!

Needing to know why Nick always runs. But I know he'll stop and do the right thing... hopefully sooner rather than later. Good work so far and I totally can't wait for more!

I like it. Suspense, action and unrequitted love combined.

Oh the poor baby!
I always thought boot meant trunk so I was confused why Greg was there and not in the backseat. (petrol=gasoline, that I knew)
What a coincidence running into Lindsey, but I think it worked to have someone to help rather than a stranger. It was another good chapter and I look forward to more of this story.

Hm... Good update, but Lindsey seems a little too skilled at opening random trunks for her young age. Where did that tool come from and how does she know how to use it? Also, I would think Nick would know what to do and wouldn't need to have a teenager explaining things. I'm also wondering what happened to Greg's boyfriend. Seems to me Nick would have seen him first and seen what condition he's in. Other than that... totally great update! Can't wait for more!

Where the ** is that ambulance? He can't die, he can't!
Update very very soon

Poor Greg... I think you own him a lot of sweetness after everything you make him live :p

awesome story:)
please update:)