Keyword: Motivation.

well done...

Nice opening chapter, I enjoyed it.
Can different gender twins be called identical though? You had them labeled as such near the beginning of the chapter.

Please tell me Kakashi will tell Naruto the secret of Kage Bunshin. That was the one thing about the manga that irked me to unimaginable levels. You've hinted at it, and Naruto has even used it (but probably has not even realized) so do something ... Sasuke and Kyoko are way beyond his level and that's kinda depressing when he's the main character and they're not even his enemies.

You killed him... You killed Tazuna... You doomed all of wave... Haku was never there... Gato is going to expand and become a bigger problem... WOW! Why hasn't anyone ELSE thought of that?!?

The only thing I can think of is... Wow, I know this is going to cause problems, but I can't think of a way to fix it! I really await seeing what you do with this.

Sorry... I tried. I really did. There's nothing wrong at all with your writing style or your grammar.
It's your OC. I HATE (loath even) her.
It's the nature of the beast.
You took everything away from Naruto and gave it to that OC twit. So of course I can't stand her, and will never be able to like her no matter how buddy buddy she is with Naruto.
There's just no way you could twist the plot to make me enjoy it or like her.

This the first fic I have found where Naruto has a twin, and I must admit that it is pretty good. The realism of their interactions was believable and the read was enjoyable. I must congratulate you and I am honestly surprised this story has the reviews it has, I was expecting more

I've always liked the idea of a story of Naruto having a twin sister, and i've found quite a few of them. However none of them were very good, and i was kind of giving up on finding one that was worth reading, then i found this.

I like the way you've done this. You've shown that just because their twins, doesnt mean that they automaticaly like each other and are inseperable. That his sister can still fall prey to the views of her guardian that Naruto is a monster. And yet even after finding out their relation, everything isn't happy straight away as if by magic. It takes time to get over insecurities and to build the familial relationship.

Great work so far, and i hope you update soon :)

Azi1987

hello Interesting story.

I spent a week reading this but that's probably cause I'm in highschool and i don't my homework for that reason hahaha poor me getting trouble but always come out of it easily hahaha... anyway so ya story was really interesting ...CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE *Squeals*

LOL! Sounds like Kyoko is about to be thrown in with Anko. That should be interesting, hehe. Not shocking Team 8 failed to protect Tazuna. A tracking team is not the best set of bodyguards, but they found out the hard way. It's a shame that Tazuna had to die, but that's how it goes, I guess. At any rate, great that Kyoko graduated along with Roku. Now if they can survive Anko... Excellent job on this chapter!

...Holy. **. You had wave mission FAILED...

YOU RULE! Although that hit to the shoulder kurenai took... That should have either lop'ed off the limb or completely disabled the limb (for arguments sake) because if im not mistaken that blades made to DECAPATE (Think it's in the name too) so removeing a limb on a clean hit isn't that much of a stretch, and you didn't go into any emergency treatment she would have undergone. (again, serious injury)

Asides from that hangup for me I though it kicked a$$.

Great. Kyoko's screwed. She has an insane women as her sensei! XD

damn that's a nice twist with zabuza and all that oh and anko as their teach yeah that's good **

You did that to the wave arc!? :O

OMG, my face lit up when I saw Anko's name- that's so cool, Anko's gonna be Kyoko's instructor XD I really wanted Kyoko to travel with Team 7, but that wouldn't really work with the 3-ninja-a-team rule.