This is amusing. It's a cheerful flower of a story growing out of the dungheap that is the Pit of Voles.

*clappa* *clappa* Yay. Not bad for fanservice. ^^

Decent story. But I *hate* "whipped" male characters, even in a parody.

But that's just me. Carry on.

Yay!

lol I'd like to see more.

Umm... wow.
Finally! I've been waiting forever for a fic that did the Shinji as a girl thing... only other one I can remember is another one I read here, but can't recall the name. Anyway, VERY nicely done... and if you want/need votes to continue, you've got a handful from me!