It isn't wordier than Clover usually is - you just have more Kazuhiko and Ran talking and they do talk more than Gingetsu does in all volumes combined. XD

I loved it. Really, really liked it - everyone (myself included) write Ran as either a child or a beautiful young man, so it was nice to see such a different and yet realistic take on Ran's aging issue.

Hope to read more from you!

I loved this- There is way to little Clover fiction- Reading this made my day, specially since Ran and Gingestsu are my favorite characers in clover. I'm horrible at reviewing fic so I'll stop now. I just wanted to say that i read this and loved it :-)