I'm throughly enjoying this story which opened my eyes to the genre of Twilight, which I know nothing about. Severus is handling the crisis of suddenly having a new family with two fifteen-year children...with all his usual grace and style. The transition of suddenly having a new father seems on the surface much easier for Draco/Alexander...as he grew-up with two loving parents, and a strong relationship with his godfather - who's now his father. Whereas Harmony, lost those whom she was believed were her parents James & Lily when she was a year old, and then spent 14yrs being abused. So her two closes friends became her world, her family, until she lost them during the final battle to defeat MoldyShorts. So I think Harmony's going to be a bit on a see-saw emotionally about how she feels about her father Severus. Especially considering there past Professor-Student relationship at hogwarts wasn't particularly the best (putting it mildly!).

Hello! I just happened to be going through the stories I have saved (Fall is one of them), and decided to check to see what you have been up to. Imagine my surprise when I found out you had another story in the works!! Thrilled doesn't begin to describe it. This is a great story so far and I can't wait to read more. Update soon please!

good good thought a little more action on the next chappy pls
and a overprotective draco and a angsty harry would be nice and of course edward a prince in shining armor yeah... sorry kind of high right now. Anyway u wrote that they can eat real food yeah how about a cooking try from Esme for harry hm pls

anwy pls update soon
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Luv how ur story is going and can't wait to see what happens next.
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I really like this story so far. The idea of a girl harry being twins with draco and snape as their father is different and really good. How did harry and draco learn they were twins? Looking forward to see how the Cullens fit in and the relationships.

Aww, Alex is so protective of Ari! It's adorable! =] But now I want to know how Alex knows Edward... Update soon! I loved the chapter! The memories were a very sweet touch. =]

Great story so far. Please update soon, and often!

IT WAS A GOOD ONE THANKS CANT WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER THANKS

Another great chapte.

Great chapter.

Interesting start to your story.

Man I'd be furious if I shrank three inches, I'm short enough as it is, lol!

Love this story Update soon.

Great chapter!
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nice