Aw :) My fav line is when Mark says "Yet you still can't find a decent job", which totally cracked me up. xD
The story is kind of unrealistic-chances are one in a million that the kids from the chat room find and recognize each other-but provides a happy ending to all the loose ends Margaret Peterson Haddix left unanswered (i.e. Jason, the chat room kids)

The extra girl is Jennifer Talbot... Good idea!

This. Is. Amazing...I honestly think this should be like the epilogue in "Among the free"

OMG i finnally found this i have been looking for this fanfic on my ipod since my laptop crashed liked two years ago i love it but you could of made Luke marry someone because the law was over and at the end of the book it said and i qoute ," he could see himself as a grown man with a farm of his own, MARRIED WITH CHILDREN of his own maybe two maybe three, maybe more but other than that it was awsome

i liked it!

This is the ending that should have happened. When I finished the series I felt like it was incomplete. This was perfect. It felt like I was reading one of the actual books.

Amazing! If I didn't know any better, I would have thought that Ms. Haddix wrote this! It's great someone remembered the chat room people x3

I loved it! It's like, he epilouge that she should have written!

FINALLY, someone writes about the chatoroom buddies!

that was wonderful!

Oh my gosh. That was AMAZING! It's been a while since I last read a Shadow Children book, but the way you wrote this story totally made it feel as if I was reading one of the actual books. Keep up the good work!