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AliceGoBoom
2009-11-26 . chapter 1
I-its like you KNOW o-o
Everything sounded so...spot on.
Have you had encounters with the Mafia?
Or are you just a really big God Father fan? ;D
But really, awesome story ._.
SoDesuKa
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
I would KILL for a sequel O.O Just so you know... x''D But seriously, I would LOVE to read more of this and especially some less-than-innocent Italy, it's quite refreshing! :D

I faved this right away, but didn't review (sorry for that!) but after rereading it about 10 times (not kidding you, I have x''D) I thought it was time to do so!

Anyway, I really really REALLY love it, 'cause it is... I don't know... totally AWESOME? "Our Thing" always manage to put me in a good mood! :3

Thank you for writing this lovely oneshot!
SoDesuKa
Ireina Kurotsuki
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
I need that Mafia fic you mentioned in your notes :D You do this so well~ I like how North Italy's not quite as stupid as he appears (I always saw him as such~) and Romano's quite affectionate to his brother in his own way.

I'll be sure to keep an eye out for more from you!

Yours,
Ireina
AnnoCat
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
Sigh...the Italian twins are so hot when they're in the mafia business! X3

Awesome story, you should make more! X3
FalseMoon
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
I...I think I love you! It was AWESOME! :D
Oh, and I saw a TV program about the Mafia's Laws! ...That thing about wives just apply to low rank mafiosi (Obvsly a Capofamiglia has nothing to worry about) if I remember correctly...
They have many, many curious details.

Uh...yeah, well, good job!
Morfic-all
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
XD It was Awesomee! I loved it!! heheh you should totally write that mafia fic! XD
Patka91
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
Oh my God! That was superb! I really, really loved it :D Please, do write more of this kind :)
StarsOfYaoi
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
hohohoho.

I was the one requesting this X3 i never thought someone would ever fill it, so i must just bow at your awesomeness and give you all my babies *hugs* (half-way through i was going all "wow, maybe she doesn't know about my request, but hell, this fills it just about great!" so yeah :D)

you made me a very happy little author X3

ok, as for the review.

wow. this was just perfect. the family bonding, the ease they worked things through, all the while talking things out, how you hinted at italy hiding more than he does under his silly smile, the jokes with spain and Vecchio...

oh, you made me SO, SO giddy X3 thank you for writing this, and wow, you have a great writing style, too. it flowed down till the end really smoothly, and it's just... wow. *squeals* no grammar mistakes that i could see, which is also great. (though, it's famiglia, not 'familigia')

so yeah, this goes in my favs x3

SOY

PS= if you really write that russia, america and romano fic, i want to read it. absolutely. (if you add italy to it somehow, like, he has to clean up things or is dragged along, i will read it twice as happily *is shot*)
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