the poem is really really good, i love it. It is basically about harry's life, and the fact that even though he has these things he should be happy about, these cannot replace the need for a family, the need for peace within and the need for happiness. Even though he is happy, there is still a space wherein the love of a family is not present. I like it very much, it mirrors the feelings of our beloved harry potter. keep up the good work!

That was a deep poem. I really liked it. I think the void is that Harry has no one to connect to, and that he, though surrounded by admirers, will probably be alone because no one living at the same time as him can really understand him. No one's been through or will have to live like Harry, so he'll always be somewhat alone. It's sad, really, how he's always on the spot and no one gives him a break (Except for Ron, Hermione, Sirius, Dumbledore, and Remus). Cool poem! Email me and tell me if I'm right!

*tear* is all your work this sad?

I hate seeing Harry hurting. However, you showed it very well.

i love this one too! right up there with your Dumbledore one! I just love the darkness and the lightin this one! It has complete opposites of the same thing put together! I think i will use this as the theme of my fic, for Harry! It is exactly how i want him to be. Can i use it? If it gets famous (i wish) it'll give you publicity for your poetry! LOL

thats really excellent!

woah! that was just too deep. cool though. I like, I like! keep writing I love your stories.