Reviews for Worried
Mikeru-D 11/5/09 . chapter 13
The nightmare blew my mind! Imagining how Kagami must have felt: that would have torn away her soul, piece by piece. So, yeah! Really cheery chapter!

Pretty much horrible enough; though you missed Halloween!

Watch it with the M-rated stuff. For now at least! _

Kagami has to get back to school first, and she's a bit too angsty to be getting into THAT with Konata yet! Maybe when something good happens, but not too soon.

Good job! Looking forward to the next one!
Redline57 11/3/09 . chapter 11
Awesome! I like this story. Simple, and with a happy ending. Great job!
Scrya V 11/2/09 . chapter 12
d'aw. the ending was so cute. xD

-dies from fluff-
kitmaro 11/2/09 . chapter 12
Where ever this story is I'll follow. Please continue, till next time bye. (w)
kitmaro 11/2/09 . chapter 11
Aw that was so fluffy! _ Please continue.
kitmaro 11/2/09 . chapter 10
Yataa the stoy continues! Those two in ponytails is a realy kawai image. n_n
Arch3rher0 11/2/09 . chapter 12
Hmm, so it turns out that Kagami didn't really have to work too hard at making Konata love her, but that's nice too since we'd probably have to wait until Konata's leg healed before we got to see anything extravagant...

Also, you made another pretty original idea of Yutaka x Minami happening before the Kaga x Kona.
Mikeru-D 11/2/09 . chapter 12
I wonder how Konata feels, finally catching up with her little cousin after 6 months? Also, said noises shouldn't really be made by two 15 year-olds... (Yeah, right...) _

I like the system for Tsukasa addressing her sisters, I may just have written that list myself...

Good job! Someone's on a roll!
Mikeru-D 11/2/09 . chapter 11
Aww! Sweet fluffy nuggets!

If only it were really as easy to ascertain love as Konata did...

Really good descriptions! You should do a yuri light-novel!

Of course: the fear that it's a dream. Textbook, but I'm sure Kagami knows she's wide awake now!

I think ending it here would have been a bad idea - we want to see Kagami make-up with her family!

Good job!
Mikeru-D 11/2/09 . chapter 10
A nice change in pace from the rushy chapters at the start! Who doesn't like a little fluff?

Still no hints about Konata liking her or not... At least there's a small mention of Minami/Yutaka. That sated my yuri hunger - for now.

Cute chapter, good thing Kagami's more normal now, cheering up a bit!

Good job!
Solarius Scorch 11/2/09 . chapter 12
Fluffy chapters... Fluffy chapters... na, na, na... Fluffy chapters...

...as Konata might summarise. :) So it happened, now we can roll in fluff 'till the end of time! Unless, of course, something new happens.

Overall, it's decent writing. Not perfect maybe, but I have faith that you'll become really good. I'll certainly be back for more.
shadowWizz 11/2/09 . chapter 12
Fluff overload!

Nicely heart-warming chapters, and i'm glad that konata has figured out her fillings for kagami.

Great development you have going here.. looking forward to future chapters! )
Scrya V 10/31/09 . chapter 9
lol, that's an interesting last line.

update soon yeah?
Mikeru-D 10/23/09 . chapter 9
I knew what Matsuri had been up to! Not the exact details, though..

I liked this chapter: random, nice storyline! No real problems: funny, cute, fun! Keep up the good chapters! Good job!

P.S. Saying you're on holiday allows me to assume you're English?
Redline57 10/23/09 . chapter 9
Well, you're pretty sick and messed up, but that was awesome, haha. I do like the story, its interesting seeing Kagami this passive, probably still in a lot of shock and all.

I've never held my head in shame before when I was alone at my computer, but when I saw when you mentioned her teacher and the evil sister I just thinking along the lines of oh no, you aren't actually going to pair THOSE two? And ya did. You really did, and ya know what? Its brilliant! Never woulda thought about it, but when you do, they sorta could fit. Nice chapter!
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