Reviews for Unbroken Will
i regret being here and 12 5/21/12 . chapter 6
OMG! I remember reading this when I was new to fanfiction and this was equally new. And it's 2012... WHERE ARE YOOUUU?

I'll be your little reminder review. Don't forget your fans here! ;P XD

- The Joker
XxPookerxX 5/5/11 . chapter 6
*sigh* I love this! Please update soon :3
Inumaru12 4/29/11 . chapter 6
Aww, poor Kyon all in denail...hopefully it all turns out well. :) I'd love to read more, it's really well written. :)

Inumaru12
Pkmn Trainer Bronze 2/13/11 . chapter 6
Oh my gawd please continue this is amazing! Like, no grammical mistakes anywhere! X3
Froffify 10/9/10 . chapter 1
:O! What a place to leave it! Definitely looking forward to more!
Coffee-Flavored Fate 9/27/10 . chapter 6
I think you could change the rating to M now. Technically.

Nice imagery.
Liila6241 9/25/10 . chapter 6
Oh my gosh! This story is so freaking awesome! I can't wait for the next update!
Shiny Pichu-chan 9/23/10 . chapter 6
Oh sweet! An update on this story totally made my day. And a lovely chapter it was. I'm looking forward to the next update D
Ishida no Revolution 7/21/10 . chapter 4
Random Koizumi POV! Hurrah.

Excellent story. It's definitely getting better!

Make sure to update soon!
Ishida no Revolution 7/21/10 . chapter 1
Wow. I think you really captured Kyon's true feeling, and actions, quite well.

*rubs hands together* I like it, I like it!
Tallis-chan 7/3/10 . chapter 5
Hmm... I wonder what will happen next for these two!
CoffeexCabbage 2/6/10 . chapter 5
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This is a great story so far. Love to see it continue. :3

One thing though. Drop the "hai" and "baka" and replace with English. Adding random simple Japanese in a fic only makes it sound a bit less mature and alot more weeabo and breaks the fic mood.
Shiny Pichu-chan 12/18/09 . chapter 5
pff, well, usually I'd rant and shout about how a work of art like this needs to have more reviews. Tons more. But I think it's become a habit of mine to find that the better the story the less recognization it gets. Which is a bit sad.

But anyway, wonderful story you got here. I envy you on your amazing in-character ability to write in first person, which for me, is as difficult as jumping out of an airplane into shark infested waters with a bleeding gash across the chest. So again, awesome story. Wonderful job. You got me on the edge of my seat now with what's going to happen next. Hope you update soon
xXSleepingXx 12/6/09 . chapter 5
Kinda starting to feel bad for Kyon at this point, but in a slightly evil, sadistic sort of way It doesnt look like this has been updated for awhile though, I hope you're still writing it, I wanna see how everything turns out.

So, on that note, pleasse update when you can

xXSleepingXX
maxari 11/17/09 . chapter 5
SO SO SO GOOD! Seriously AMAZING I'm gagging for the next chapter!
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