yes! this-chapter-makes-me-so HAPPY!

wow that was a very enjoyable read thank you for posting it! :D

NO! he can't become kira again

“You can’t give up because of Kira!”

it gives me hope :D I hope he's also talking to himself DX please?

no he can't have found it he'll be different he'll show L right? DX DX

ur story is very emotional

it is very good

but still pulls on the heart strings ;_;

I was glad to find this story, it had L and Light together, time travel and it is completed - all elements I love :) Although it could use a round of betaing. I also got the feeling that Light simply did not want to understand L's hints when he was told to give up the death note, he loved the power. Lucky he decided in L's favor in the end!

I cried honesty I did

“What was your friend’s name that you could not save?”
“I never said I didn’t save him.” L replied. “His name was Kira.”

wow that's all I got for you :D

Ohmygod, I love it! Your writing as amazing, the plot as well. This is seriously good stuff, THANK YOU SO MUCH for putting it up ^^

Oh! Exciting. Also, I'm going to be a mean ** and point out that their are A LOT of spelling errors in the last few chappies. The story is fab, but the spelling is the only thing bringing it down. Not all the sentences make sense and it distracts from the good narrative. Constructive criticism, this is only to make the story better :)

he had sex after his first date *shakes head* I am shocked and APPALLED!!

“I know that…” Watari began and then asked loudly. “WHAT?”
lmfao xD

PHEW- he's just horribly blinded, not dead :)


Light is such a skank, kissing a guy on the first date!! My parents would be SHOCKED at such forward behaviour!

hehe, when you talk about a 'homeless man' that Light dreamt of, I immediatly imagined some dude in a shoddy brown overcoat, with yellow teeth and a scraggly beard saying 'spare any change?'
Obvs, I was quite confused as to how this related to the story. It was a second guess that suggested Lawliet. Hahaha, poor L. I don't think he looks like a tramp :)

Watari's ominous talk frightens me. Please don't die L! His chances of dying for Light have increased with Wtari's suggestions! *Runs around with hands on head before tripping over a box and screaming 'DAMN!'*

oh no! What's 'the Price'? Its not sacrifice is it? PLEASE do not kill L, my weak heart cannot take it!! *Weeps long, loudly and passionately (like an LxRaito ff sex scene) before adding story to favourites and reading the next chapter*

Kyah! <3

That's all I can say.

Loved it!

Aw! ^.^ So cute. Another amazing story by you. Great job. =)

So ... so cute !
I'm crying it's so happy !
I don't want it to end ! :D

YAY! L'S LIGHT IS BACK! EEPZA! :) lol can't wait 4 next chappie! :) thnx 4 update