yay! I am glad it had a happy ending! :)
good story!
it was awesome, really. :)

oh wow, this is really intense.
and the writing is absoutly beautiful.

i cant wait to see what happens, and i really want to figure out what happened to Sora...he died, obviously, but how?
and did Namine think it was partly her fault?
hmm, because if she did, that would make everything very interesting.

anyway, off to read the next chapter, peace!

Okay, so I'm jumping around your fics, catching whichever one I feel in the mood to read over. This one I felt was the easiest to go over and to review for now; but I do promise in getting through the rest! All I ask for is patience! :3 I know I've been acting like a total spazz lately, but I'm reflecting it too much on my personal love for Namixas and I shouldn't do that to them. Which is something I need to stop on; I had a good cry, so I feel more adjusted and relieved with my life; though I wish I weren't sick as of currently right now >:/

No Sora! Don't be a meanie about the break-up! D': I still love him anyway, despite breaking Namine's heart. Poor Namine, so confused; don't worry! Good old ice-cream and chocolate will make it better ;D! At least for me it does >>.

AH HA! So you believe Sora could be the older one too! :D I think the same way, I never saw Roxas as the oldest. It seemed to me that Sora fits the part, you know, the whole older, cheerful, and lovable brother part of it all and stuff. He shows more care too, so it doesn't fit Roxas at all that much. I think the only reason why people make Roxas the oldest most of the time is because he's more serious and cool-collected, while Sora is more playful and a goof. Oh well, to each their own opinion.

lol, the way you described Sora made me swoon for him XD, dammit, if only he was real or someone close to being real as him -pouts-

It was kind of hard to pick who Namine should go with just from that one part you wrote based on their differences. They both have good values as they do their faults; if I was Namine, I'd be stuck on who to choose as well.

Roxas has the rights to feel doubts over her confession, but come on! The girl literally ran in the pouring rain to tell him she loved him, if that doesn't show how much she loved him more than Sora, than I don't what love is apparently is. Geez, -smacks forehead- still, beautiful setting and devotion to the pairing on your part, this is definitely something better than I could ever write; I mean come on, a lot of people love you and your work! :D Alright, enough suck up from me, continuing...I'm very curious, how old are they in this fic? They seem to be older than teens obviously, but I was just curious.

Roxas's words were cold, but Namine's confession was beautiful; such lovely angst and fluff, you know just how I like them ;D.

I didn't get how the kiss was suppose to be proof or life changing, but everything clicked when you mentioned 'first time', because it has always been Roxas to be the one to have kissed her. Namine mentioned how he would claim her lips, but how she would never respond of pursue one with him. I understand why you did that! lol, slow me only had to wait 10 seconds for it to all click XD.

You do have the potential and knack in writing your own lemon; I could see why people who suggest that, but I understand the reasons why you wouldn't. I think the latest one I made between Namine and Roxas would be my last as a one-shot; I feel awkward if it's just one chapter based on them having sex, definitely more comfortable if there's a longer story behind it with meaning.

I didn't think the ending wasn't that bad, to be honest, I do think there was a certain point where you could've stopped, but other than that I enjoyed it :3. This was truly good, sorry it took me so long in reading and reviewing it ><. Now tell me, is this the longest review I ever given you? Did I just break a new record? And I say that with much voice over of the voice who says "New Record!" in Mario Party XD.

You have been reviewed by yours truly,
Kiome-Yasha <3

P.S. TWYRM will be updated hopefully soon, I hope you look forward to it. :) Hoped you enjoyed the long review. ;D

Hahahaha sorry but i completely forgot to read the second chap! but now that i did i am so happy i did! Aw she finally let roxas in! And the song actually does portray Nami's feelings! I loved this fic!

...Wow.
I'm sorry. I can't say anything else except you and Handwritten are like my romance writer inspirations.
*stares blankly* I think this story fried my brain! XD

Oh, I did not like Namine in this story. I kinda hated how Roxas put up with it but then again, he stepped up his game. XD This was a joy to read. This ending was fantastic. Prehaps a sequel? XD

God bless!

Wow! >< You did a very go0Od job! xD The ending was great~ x3 You did a very awesome job, keep up the great work! ^^ ♥

AWESOMESAUCE! I love you for making this a two-shot. It's so well-written and you potray Namine's emotions so well. And I loved the ending, it was sweet and very fitting!

Absolutely beautiful. Seriously, I love this story. I did find one mistake, though.

"it was only until know she realized that she always wanted to do that."

I think you meant now, not know.

In any case, congrats on the fantastic work.

poor roku-kun :( namine why you no love him!?

Sniff. I didn't cry, I'm so proud. My eyes were stinging the whole time, but I kept the tears at bay! Okay, I didn't hate Roxas and Namine as much the second time around :) They're so cute! Great two-shot, so raw and real! I loved it!

My gosh, that's so painful! How could you go through something like that? I hate Namine right now, that's how good you wrote this. And I hate Roxas too for being stupid and staying with someone who treats so badly! Geez. Imma slap both them suckas! ;)

this is...gorgeous.
my friend recommended it and it's just so
amazing and unique and DIFFERENT.
great great job ! aha this'll probably
go under my recommended reads :D

~ nora

aw! that was so cute! inferno had a great ending and so did storm. Im glad everyone voted yes. definatley worth it. did i mention how cute it was??

I luv this story, the plot, the pairing, the wording...
It's awesome! And how do u just find song tht inspire u to rite ANYTHING?
It's awesome, except 4 the fact sora is probably dead...
sob sob i luv sora sob sob WHY?!?!?!?! sob
anyway, i'd better finish riting this review and go and read Illuminate, or something.
P.S: This is very touching but I don't lyk the fact tht it tells evryone 'Sex is the answer'. That prolly wasnt ur aim but...ok I'll shut up b4 u get angry with me and tell me 2 F OFF...
srry, i'll shut up...my story isnt any better.