This was powerful. You really knew her mind at the time she was shot. And the way you added the lines that made her, her...was excellent.

My favorite lines

"But, most importantly, she’ll live on in the memories of every person she helped in her time with the New York City Police Department.

…What's important now is that we fight equally as hard to find the cowards who did this. We have a proud history in the NYPD. When one of our own is taken from us... we always get our man. Always. Now go out and do what you do best. Her family's counting on us."

Marvelous job!