 Phoenixarrow 2009-11-03 . chapter 1This is a beautiful and sweet little story. Thank you for sharing it.
Poor Bulma, I can't even imagine the fear of having lost a child that fast in such a big house.
I love Vegeta in this story. He is going to make quite a good father (well, considering his upbringing) if he continues along this track.
looking foreword to reading more of your stories.
happy writing,
Phoenixarrow |
 Teagarden 2009-10-12 . chapter 1Awesome story. Great job incorporating the title into it. I loved how Vegeta felt that he was expendable, and then Bulma thinks that he was a missing part, not an unneeded one. |
 Runaway Roadkill 2009-10-09 . chapter 1I love you forever @__@ |
 Sessho's Gal 2009-09-26 . chapter 1love it |
 Infinite Pen 2009-09-22 . chapter 1Let me start by saying, It's nice to see another one from D4! You've been holding back! Shame on you!
Anyway, this was very cute...simply cute. The family bonding was so sweet, even though Vegeta was his usual grouchy self. I actually drew a mental picture of Trunks on Vegeta's shoulders...now only if I could get that on some paper it would be a masterpiece, LOL...
Well done! Hope to see more in the future...I know I will, right? |
 Unlisshed 2009-09-18 . chapter 1Welcome back, D4! I was excited when I saw that you had done a new story.
I really liked this, a really nice moment, and really well writen as usual. |
 renahina 2009-09-16 . chapter 1 Whoao! This is son cute.. i loved!
Vegeta and Bulma are perfect together an you write very well... congratulations! |
 h.psane 2009-09-15 . chapter 1aw. so cute! I love how they all interaced, and they were all very much like the characters, no one was OC. Good story. Instant fav! |
 omnipotent Porunga 2009-09-15 . chapter 1wonderful, wonderful tale of bonding, not just between parent-child, but between the two parents as well.
we do find fics with V/T bonding or V/B bonding, but V/B bonding on the PARENTAL LEVEL is something unique.
thank you for conceiving the idea... |
 Musette Fujiwara 2009-09-15 . chapter 1I loved it... |
 VeggieBlueRaven 2009-09-15 . chapter 1So Sweet! Very nicely done! |