hey great begining to a story that holds many secrets about what going to happen coz its a chapter long
i think this story is going to be great when it is finished
i hope there will be more chapters soon

The story's good, but ya gotta make Max a little more angry, Logan a little more um...u know Logan... gotta remember that the whole fiery/flirty thing they got goin on's what we shippery readers love...Keept it up AND FINISH THE DANG STORY!

This first made me giggle and then made me want more. Keep up the good work!

Its cute...I want more, please!

Hehehe, looks like it will be funny. Go on and I'll read. :)

I loved the way Max misunderstood Logan's reason for asking her to go on Saturday...very humorous...clever. And I really like the way Max described a date. Threw Logan for a loop! A date is something Max and Logan never really did...and needed to. This fic is fun...and well written. Looking forward to more!

it looks very promising. good m/l banter. i'd love to see this story update - and QUICK!

I like the meek Logan. More please

You have got to carry on. You write really well and this could also turn into a great story. Please finish it.

Ted

Oo..Oo..Oo.. please write more...soon.

Ahhhh! *Kyre's shipper heart grows a bit* Will this be continued or is this the end? Either way, it's good.

Can't wait to see more of this!;)

HAHA! i love that! The last part was so cute and funny!

Good story! Write more. Will Max's definition come true? *All* of it? heehee

Loved Max's definition of a D.A.T.E.. If Logan wasn't nervous before that would definitely have done it. Logan's confusion about the 'no's' was priceless as was Max's final clarification. Wonderful teasing, shippiness. Great writing.