Oh, this was an interesting one!

Personally, I think Frollo's an old pervert - lol! - but I liked how you made it all believable. Poor Quasi, so naive ...

That was lovely, beautifully written, but so sad! Poor Esme! Poor Quasi! Even poor Frollo! Damn, it is such heartbreaking tragedy!

Cool! I'm in the midst of a personal struggle with Frollo; I think he's perverse and my friend sees him as a misunderstood tragic hero. This story helps me see his point of view a bit more easily, so I thank you.

Very well written, too. Really excellent. And I like how you get inside both characters' heads!

Emilie Rose