OMG! That's so horrible! Why would the seru do that, i didn't think they would be like that after the mist was gone! I really want to know what the heck is going on. Toodles. :)

Good fanfic. I picked Legend of Legaia up on a whim, and found (to my pleasure) that it was a very good game. Although the part where Noa's parents died rent my little heart... (sniffle)
An interesting take. Did Vahn perform his "Miracle" attack? It will be very intriguing to see where you go from here...
Waiting for chapter 3.
Your Fellow Author,
-Silverlocke980

I must say, for what has been written so far, I LIKE IT! I hope you continue this wonderful story to a conclusion.

I really like the story!

You are writing a good fic. If you could do me a favor and please keep on adding chapters because this is a very good fic.

keep on writing...it's good!

your fic is great, you do a good work in the fights, i hope you put the other chapters soon.

I can't wait for the next Chapter!. You have great discription. The character's are so well done.

I hope you bring Meta, Terra and Ozma back. Please hurrry with the next chapter!

I think that this is the best LOL fanfic that I have ever read. Keep writing, I really want to know how Vahn attained such strength and speed without the use of a seru.

this is good so far i hope you plan on finising it!

A most intriguing and well-written story. I look forward to the next chapter.

Great!

Great battle depictions, and the beginning is interesting. I liked mostly the great work on the characters' emotions, this is up to a great start.

Hey, this was awesome. Ya got my attention right from the start, and I really love the details, the story's got a really nice tone to it.. keep it up _

This is awesome. Please write more!