 withering-blackrose 2009-12-13 . chapter 4the thought of yahiko being an old man kinda makes me sad :(
but i love how you portrayed him. he has his old personality still, but he's more calm and mature. Also im guessing aoshi is the dragon.
Cant wait for the next chapter, sounds like it'll be very interesting.
please update soon
Blackrose
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 Itachiforever342 2009-12-13 . chapter 4That was very invigorating. I sure hope the next chapter comes out quicker than the first one, I was nervous that it would take forever! You're still one of my favorites when it comes to your skill in writing! |
 Becky 2009-12-08 . chapter 4 YAY!! AN UPDATE!! completely made my entire week! I think u created yahiko's elderly character very well... i like how sano still refers to him as "kid" even though he's an old man now. I'm guessing that dragon at the end is some form of Aoshi?? I do hope one of them wakes up soon (probably misao first right?). Thank u for updating! :) |
 USWeasilgirl 2009-12-08 . chapter 4please update son! |
 white_fang_585 2009-12-08 . chapter 4 OH MY GOSH! You updated finally! YAY! As always, this chapter is just as riveting as the past ones, GOOD WORK! This is incredible considering you have been really busy wth your other work as well. Keep up the awesome work you've got going here, looking forward to the next chappie |
 poems2songs 2009-12-07 . chapter 4great update... seems that kenshin and sano are having conflicts... and now with aoshi and misao's situation things are quite complicated... what's misao going to do?... hope things work out fine for everyone... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
 kimi.the.water.spirit 2009-12-07 . chapter 4Now that was trippy... Misao seems to have found Aoshi and I'm glad that he's there to help her. That is him right? Well I love that you updated and I can't wait to read another update of yours so don't keep us hanging for too long ;)
-Kimi-chan^-^ |
 tonchi 2009-11-02 . chapter 3 gripping story! :) i've been waiting for the a/m part and as usual your writing is suspenseful, action-packed with great emotional and lyrical description as well. love the way you decided to portray the violence of aoshi though now all your readers are left to worry over both of your characters! :) thanks so much for writing this! |
 Falln4DarkAngel 2009-11-01 . chapter 3Oh gee Hiko good job. of course Misao will be fine. lol I'm not that bitter. I just think its unfair that Hiko knows that Aoshi claimed Misao and yet he's still forcing him to go to ground for a few years =(
update son! I wanna see how Misao copes with all this xD |
 RedWingedAngel002 2009-11-01 . chapter 3Omg! Fantastic update!
ARi chan |
 Itachiforever342 2009-10-25 . chapter 3Such a good chapter, I can't wait for the next one, whenever it comes! Keep up the good work! |
 Shenhui 2009-10-25 . chapter 3 Ouiss... I've managed to read the fourth installation.. -dances around- I love this series... do continue with the next chapter... can't wait for it.. |
 kittenkatie 2009-10-25 . chapter 3awesome story, i love it so far. please review soon. |
 Adelaide MacGregor 2009-10-24 . chapter 3Good chapter. Saito instead of Aoshi though in the one part--I had to re-read it and giggle. Good luck! |
 Generated Anomoly 2009-10-24 . chapter 3Fantastic chapter. Poor Misao...poor Kaoru!! Such turmoil in their lives.
Look forward to the next one. =3
Jenni |