Brilliant sroryline. I do think that if they ever had a sequel to 'The Time Travellers Wife' it would be this. Or at least in the same context. I hope that you will continue writting despite time opposing you because this story deserves to end beautifully,even if it ends the same way its original did. Bravo.

You have captured the essence of the Time Traveler's Wife, as well as my interest in your characters! I know it's been a while since your last update, but please, if you can find the time, update again. I would love to find out more. You can't just leave us hanging here! You say the story is in your head, but that doesn't help the poor folk like me who are not in your head with you!

write more please

I'm so glad you updated again! I've been waiting for such a long time, and truth be told, kind of forgot about this story. Therefore, I just reread it. I also forgot how good it is! The emotions are portrayed so well. I looked up "The Letter" from Billy Elliot and as I read that chapter, I listened to it. It fit the chapter so well. Such a wonderful story. Please update soon!

this is still so good! im still reading! keep updating please! happy ending i beg of you

Well, at least you show remorce. But seriously, I went five YEARS between updates once. Been about three months since the last update of that particular story, but it's kind of a pain in the ass. I've got a love/hate relationship with it, really.

But you did update, and some of this probably would make a lot more sense if I had the rest of it fresh in my mind, and it was good. I hope you get to keep writing this like you want and we get see how the story ends.

And hey, bet you're glad to see a review so quick, huh?

Good luck.

Makokam out.

How marvellous! I love this story and was thrilled to see a new chapter. Please do keep writing, as you have a gift!

Please please write more

Please please write the next chapter

Hello,Kumasta Ka ? I am in the middle of reading your wonderful story "Time Travel & Sandwiches"

You have a great gift for story telling.

I love how you write the characters, it's as if we are reading a direct follow on from the novel.

The stories of Alba's adventures I find really interesting & I like the Tagalog bits you add in too.

Your writing style & the description of events is very easy to read & I find myself eager to get to the next chapter.

What started out as a oneshot has grown to 15 chapters, but no updates since November last year! You must be busy.

O.K. all for now, (I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter.)

Paalam,

TimBo.

Oh damn, ignore that last review. [Sheepish smile] Sorry, my computer screwed up and I thought that was it. D:

Sorry about that, but I think this is a great story! Good plot, and the writing flows very nicely.

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great fsnfic so far can't wait to read more

sad but sweet.

nice