Yay! A new chapter! And and action-packed, intriguing one, too. :)

Awesome story beginning, man. I'm a big SG fan (Sg-1, Atlantis) aspiring SG fanfic writer.

I'm intrigued for more plotline about these powerful, unnamed aliens. Might they be [albeit Ori-like] Furling? I consiered clues like the elf-like description of the alien woman's ear and the alien battleship firing a red plasma beam, which I've seen in ome other fanfics where people theorize bout the Furlings.

U have me hooked. I'm almost done writing Part 1 o mine
since I jut joined can't pot it tonight till btw 10PM/11PM.


On SGU, I continue to watch it; it has its merits but I think traditional fan like me undertandably are le interested b/c the show does well for a less SG1/SGA type story, but can't hold a candle in being light-hearted, alien-civ/ tech=oriented like 1, A.

Pleae look for my fanfic "The Final Finding of the Furlings". I'd appreciate your reviews. Look forward to chatting w/ u in the future. Pleae keep up the good work.

Loved this chapter. Especially Ka'cha'nay!

Unas weapons expert! Yes yes yes! That is so awesome. Very well done, my friend, I'm loving this. Which is a really good sign because it's pretty rare that I like a team other than good ol' SG1. Evil cliffhanger, however. Get the next chapter up soon! :)

Oh, guess what? My laptop decided to quit on me. I'm going to try and get it fixed, and luckily all my stuff was backed up, but I'm still annoyed. How's your computer doing?

This story certainly looks interesting. Keep it up. :)

Pretty interesting so far. Just one thing. (you wrote - OCs, but with plenty of canon characters thrown in.) What are OCs? Other characters, since you mention throwing in canon ones?

Wow. Very interesting beginning. Cant wait to read more.

Okay... Nice story, I enjoyed it. Actually better than nice so far. My interest is piqued, hopefully it will stay piqued.

YAY! SG-20! This sounds like it's going to be AWESOME. You always have the perfect balance of detail. Not so much that it bogs the scene down, but plenty to help us picture it. And I think it totally makes sense to have a Navy Seal in there. They are awesome. I am so, so excited for the next chapter! I can't wait to meet SG-20 themselves!

it's good so far! is the team going to be like sg-1, characters and all, or are they going to be completely different? please update soon!

Very good start for a new series. Can't wait for you to update.