|Reviews for Bleached|
| OrionTheHunter 5/27/10 . chapter 6
Great! Welcome back to writing, or at least to posting. I hope that you had fun writing this.
| Julian Carax 5/27/10 . chapter 6
For the most part it's good. One little change I'd make in the line '"And will you really do that? I wonder what Captain Unohana would say." Jyuushiro said. He laughed at the sight of Harry who was quickly looking around the garden. Seeing his beloved Retsu nowhere near the vicinity, he settled at glaring Jyuushiro.' is that after the first sentence I'd have 'Jyuushiro said, looking over Harry's shoulder.' as it'd give a reason for him to look around for her. Seemed sort of... well, odd to me when I read it at the time.
Other than that... good stuff xD.
Unohana is a bit kinky, huh?
Keep up the good work.
| Orchamus 5/27/10 . chapter 6
The bit between Zangetsu and Fuijin was interesting, as was the meeting between the three captains.
| dupel 5/27/10 . chapter 6
Yay! A new chapter, and a brilliant one too.
Cnat wait for the climax )
Thanks and good luck!
| BioHazard82 5/27/10 . chapter 6
Read it on DLP, but figured I review here also. Great chapter.
| sin1989 5/26/10 . chapter 5
damn i wasnt so shure about this story first harry/bleach i have seen but you surprised me it was a realy great read and i cant wait ill keep an eye out for updates
| Ruroniiii 5/23/10 . chapter 3
Need more,it's a great story!
| Evan Jameson 5/11/10 . chapter 5
Good good! I like to see some of the lesser-used crossovers. There's only so much vanilla HP, HP/BtVS, and HP/LotR one can take! I'm hoping for more
| randomuser69 5/10/10 . chapter 2
Please update soon. This is a very interesting fic.
| Parry Otter 351 4/23/10 . chapter 5
As always, this story is a pleasure to read. But, after reading through it several times, as well as other stories of yours, I am wondering if RL is causing more problems for you. It has been two months since you last updated your profile, and more since you alluded to a major update. I understand that Real Life takes precident over writing fan fiction, but it may be easier for your rabid fans to be patient if we had a clue to the holdup on the updates. Perhaps if you worked on the story or stories that are closest to being finished, and tried completing them first? Hopefully, I won't go an entire year without an update on my favorite, Power of Oa. Never surrender, never stop, keep writing, yah! (LOL) Hope to hear from you soon.
| Dragon Prime 4/16/10 . chapter 5
i love your story
i readed it 15 times
when the next chaper out?
| CrisscrossAnime 4/9/10 . chapter 5
I don't know anyone pointed this out before, but.. you said that Fuuko Ando transferred to the Second Division in chapter 4, and yet she is said to be a third seat in the Mobile Corp in Chapter 5? Is that a mistake?
Apart from that, I have to say I enjoyed your story very much! Looking forward to the next chapter! D
| Buza 4/8/10 . chapter 5
Nice chapter. Hope you havent abandoned this fic.
| d11934623q 4/5/10 . chapter 5
I like all your works, but this wait for the next chapter in all of them is starting to drive me insane. If you're not going to update them soon please at least give us a progress update on your profile page just to tide us over.
| Birga 4/3/10 . chapter 5
I don't know (much) about Bleach, however your story is well written and presents the characters so I don't have to. props to you