AH y did u have to stop there of all places! that was really good u have 2 finish!

um... its written very well bt some of the facts about ron are wroung... like theat he likes animals but it is very kwl

Yeah I like a smarter Ron. People dumb him down too much and never give him credit. I half think that JK only added him in as a comic relief character.

Ah so Umbridge is teaching this year? Poor Ron! I wonder who it was that did bite him..

Still good!

Sorry i cant think of anything else to put

But ill feel back if i say nothing:)

SoStill good!

I have to admit, the summary made me giggle. This idea is very entertaining and interesting, I will be keeping an eye on you :]

uh oh.

Nice chapter :) Glad to see that he's started writing the letters already. I wonder if harry will accidentally find out somehow. Good so far!

Yay letters! lol

So exciting:)

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It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student

I like your story so far! I wonder how those five people will react to Ron's new, uh . . . condition:)

Haha! I started laughing at the idea of Ron becoming a werewolf! Who will he tell? Will they support him? Sounds good :)