A great chapter :) I like how you have linked Ronnie's urge to find Danielle and her urge to find Amy's grave, it is a nice way to work the story together.

The interaction between Stacey and Ronnie was good as well, Stacey being very aggressive yet protective is very in character whilst you have written Ronnie well throughout the chapter as well, with her conflicting and confusing feelings along with her own protective and motherly urges.

I look forward to reading more :)

This fic goes from strength to strength. The writing is brilliant and I love the plot. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Really enjoying this fic, great writing. Update soon

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Ronnie go and find Danielle and bring her home safe and sound
Another great chapter
Please update

Another good chapter. Going from strength to strength. The early shift in Ronnie's character is a good move. Also, I NEVER understood why Ronnie simply took Archie's word that her child had died. Considering everything that he has done, why would she just believe him when it came to such an important matter like her baby?

Eagerly awaiting more. :)

Really brilliant chapter.Glad Ronnie is going to look for her Amy's grave.Will it lead her to Danielle i wonder.Nice that Ronnie cares so much for Danielle.xmadeleine

Nice chapter, bit of arguement between Ronnie and Stacey. its nice how Ronnie has the urge to care for Danielle even if she isn't with her and she doesn't know who she is :D glad Ronnie's going to start searching. update soon!! x

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" I know you regret ever having your baby, you're better off without her." - Ronnie reads these lines and its like a knife to her heart. The dichotomy of the situation is so sad - Danielle belives Ronnie never wanted her and is now better off without her; Ronnie reads these lines written by this "random" girl and is forced to relive the heartbreak of having given away the one person she has longed for for all her adult life. The sadness is punctuated even more by the fact that Ronnie is completely in the dark as to Dan's identity.

I'm glad you allowed Ronnie to analyse the words that Dan wrote. Her tendency as the "ice queen" might have been to freeze the hurt and put up the anger shield but she doesn't do this as its obvious Dan has already begun to pierce the outer layer of that shield - at "their most simple, she knew that these words had meant something to Danielle as she wrote them; these words were what Danielle believed to be truth, these words provided Ronnie with the reason that she had run away. And these words had been meant for her, for her eyes only."

I'm really enjoying the approach you have taken here. When I cast my mind back to February on EE when we had R & D going to the clinic together it brings back some very sad but also poignant memories as it was one of the few times we saw an emotional and physical connection between Ronnie and Danielle - Danielle was able to hold Ronnie's hand, albeit briefly, and it was so heatbreakingly sad that Ronnie did not know the reality of the situation that was unfolding before her eyes.

Taking up the story from here but with a wonderfully different slant is fantastic and allows a lot of scope for character and storyline development. You don't have to rush into a dramatic reveal if you so wish but you can work on perhaps having Ronnie seek Danielle out to forge some kind of friendship and mutual understanding between the pair.

For me, you've written the character of Danielle superbly - her yearning for physical contact from her Mum, her inner turmoil at having to wrestle with making this decision is written fantastically. Clearly she wants to keep her baby but she also wants to please her Mother and she sees the method of pleasing her is by doing the one thing that Ronnie told Dan she should have done i.e. get rid of her baby. The part where Dan inadvertenly spills water on Ronnie's trouser leg was a part I really liked as it showed Dan's fear of Ronnie immediately, her instant reaction is to apologise and almost cower waiting for the wrath of Ronnie to occur !

Stacy and Ronnie's interaction - I could see it on the screen almost - written fantastically true to their on screen characters !

The note at the end - all those "sorry's" from Dan. Sorry for letting her Mum down, sorry for not having the courage to do what Ronnie told her she should have and that one heartbreaking line that must be ripping Dan apart at the moment - "I know you regret having your baby, you're better off without her"...If only the walls could talk and the truth could out soon !

gd work, hope there r more chapters to come :)

Fantastic update! I love how Ronnie finally started to realise that she had had a bit of an effect on Danielle! Can't wait to read more.

Go and find her Ronnie...she really needs you!!
Another great update hun!
Please do more son x

I really liked that chapter. The part with Ronnie sitting on the step, reading the letter over and over, was great and carried great weight and heartache. Excellently written. Can't wait for more. :)

really good chapter!!
Ronnie has regrets and pain for the things she said to Danielle without even realising who she is. Am i sensing a little trip to Telford maybe?? :P i hope Ronnie finds Danielle and tells her the truth, which Danielle has to then do the same and spill the beans :D great writing!
please update soon
xx