You Should Have Continued This One Shot This Could Have Turned Out To Be A Very Interesting Story

Wish you would continue this story it was really god :)

This was so funny! Stupid Jake. Bringing home eggs? What was he thinking? lol I was laughing so much during this. Climbing up the fire escape. hahaha Crazy girl! And not only that, but then climbing into someone's apartment! Oh god! But yay for it being NakedWard's apartment! lol And even more yay for her getting trapped in the shower, and for him wanting to take a shower. And then she lands on top of him, NAKED! BWAHAHAHA! OMG! Love it! The rest was just fucking HOT! And now I absolutely HAVE to have moreeeeee! Please! Don't you love me? lol

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

OH MY GOD! Can you PLEASE continue this? I'll do ANYTHING! I SERIOUSLY want to see what happens next! Can you make them have a crazy sexy affair? That would be SOOO amazing and just... FUCKHOT!

Um, this NEEDS to be a multi chapter fic. These two NEED to get together, and I NEED to read about. I'm not kidding. It must happen.

I don't know who I love more, pretentious Bella, or cocky Nakedward. He was delicious...

I read this sometime last year and it pops in my head periodically, but I couldn't ever find it. I'm so glad I just read your "Crossroads" and saw this in your stories. This B and E make me chuckle, and I really wish this was a fleshed-out story; there's just something about it that has resonated with me. It may just be Bella's passionate nature. :)

Omg, i can't believe this is complete. This should be made a proper story. It's soooo good. Will you think about it? We need proper lemmons in this :D x

More of this please, even if it's only one more chapter! I loved this!

I loved this! OMG i was lol'ing. Thanks for the great read, i would love to see this expanded to perhaps a 4 shot. LOL Thanks.

That was hilarious! I guess there will be no continuation, but the story is perfect as it is anyway! I loved how embarrassing it was for her when he was pissing, and how she went for slapping him ("Morals are more important" - that was priceles!) Thank you for self-pimping on ADF. I'm a veg too, let's unite, ladies!

Hey there, sorry for they delay on reviewing this baby, i read it last night but it was like 3AM or smthing so i just thought it would be better to leave this to the morning or else it would probably be just nonsensical rumbling and a bunch of slurrying...

dude, you are a pervy little tease! this thing is so hot! and the cockblocking, ugh, i feel like punching something, but i get that this is what makes this story so irresistible.

Your VeganElla is rad! I mean, we'd totally hate each other on RL, but it's nice to have a little insight of what's going on inside her head and realize that even the most activists amongst us still have a second of doubt now and then, specially when a handsome boy is involved.

I'm gonna go off now and imagine several different lemony continuations for this. And when i'm done i'll come back and rad the rest of your stuff, it all sounds very interesting )

(oh yeah, if it's not clear i'm Billa from ADF)

cute! thanks for pimping it on ADF

This is so awesome...! It had me giggling so hard, my ribs kinda hurt..It was hilariously hot! Please please please continue this. What do I have to do to make you continue this?

I liked it. Will this be continued?