Wow. A very dark chapter.

So unlike my usual Edward luring Catherine and the joy in killing her. So sad he sees Bella in all of them.

Very creative and well written.

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Maybe it is a good thing she has amnesia.

She'll be pissed when she realizes its Edward, wouldn't she?

BFFs with Alice blew me away.

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He's so adorable talking to her

*snort* doctor-faking fool

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Loved this chapter.

Its like reading two different people.

The monster and the good one.

Maybe watching the monster in the mirror would keep him focused. js ;)

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WTH? Why was she in NC? Why hasn't Alice warned him?

Shit!

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Great start.

I miss MS, haven't read it in a while.

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Really good story. It's different and well writen. Great job!

Like it so far!

I love it! so intense.. so deep.. so Edward.. I love his POV.. it's just so much more there.. then Bella.. of course I love Bella, but Edward's character is so deep, so old.. there is a lot there.. his thinking..his vamp abilities.. the way he sees the world.. it's only first chapter.. but I'm engrossed.. and I want more..

I think it says a lot:)

great writing!

Loved this story!

Love love

This is good!

I just discovered this story and am loving it :) I love an "angsty" Edward, and you write him with such fluidity and grace, I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for providing me with a great read on a Tuesday morning.

A fitting ending, positive and hopeful. New beginning for all of them, hopefully together again.