i'm sure it wud b awkward hugging an electabuzz... or shocking! ouch!

oh i luv this story so much!
and paul is so cute! his sensitive side is so attractting lol.
hope u update soon!

Easy!
Make them practice attack combinations
Dawn's a coordinator, she knwos about that
And a good combination is also good for battles
Like honchkrow doing a Drill peck/Dark Pulse combo
or electabuzz with an Iron tail/thunder misc.
try something ;D

Electabuzz could try to strengthen his Thunder attack into something that could burn, like directing it to a tree and burning it instantly, Weavile could try to make its Metal Claw sharp enough to cut through steel, Honchkrow could strengthen its Night Slash or something. I don't know. Ursaring could try to power up his Focus Blast, I suppose.
Great! You finally updated! Thanks so much! If you need any more suggestions, you can just contact me. And thanks again.

oh please keep going on! i love this story!!

wow... i guess even paul can smile! ^-^ still can't imagine it though... heh, great chapter anyways! and ash is starting to annoy me...

I LIKEY!! That was adorable at the end!! But seriously, when did Dawn get a Cyndaquil?

I didn't likey chapter 2 for some reason I forget now, but I was close to closing... :S

But I was persistant and found I quite like this cuteness. I'd like to see some more now.

Oh yeah, and Honchkrow is spelt with a 'K'. ^^

I like it! Dawn and Paul should trade pokemon! cyndaquil goes to Paul, and Dawn gets one of his! Or even better, Cyndaquil starts "dating" Weavile, (after evolving into Quilava, of course)

I love last scene of this chapter. It was very sweet. :)

this was great keep writing cant wait for next chapter

Good job! Paul was so sweet, although a little OC! Please update soon!

I love this story. It's so good! Plz update soon! :)

Omg, this is so utterly awesome! I love the sensative Paul, it's different and sweet.
Aw, I HATE writers block, it's so annoying isn't it?

I hope you update this soon!

~Caitlin

I love this chapter! It's so good that Paul asked Dawn for help.
Paul crying in front of Torterra was very touching. I almost cried.