aaww that so lovely! and a bit sad! I love it great work!

Mistal
peace~

Dang, your writing disturbs me.

...(heh) I knew I'd find you here.

Aww I love Seifer/Squall ^O^ That was well written, and I really like your style! I'll be sure to read what else you write ^_~

Nice work but they seem a little ooc in this chapter, more like a romance novel than Squall/Seifer but with a few tweaks you'll have it sorted, keep up the good work.