omg this is great so far i cant wait to see what happens next
keep up the great work :D

Wonderful first chapter. I am so excited to read more. I have loved all of your other collections, and Kakashi and Sakura are one of my favorite pairings. I know you will do them the justice they deserve!

Hmm. I haven't seen a story from quite this angle yet. So far, I like it, but there's not really enough here to judge. I'll be following.

NO! don't stop!

Oh, I'm so happy someone is taking off from that part in the manga! And that it's a Kaka/Saku no less! I think this is off to an admirable start.

I laughed out loud when Tsunade mentioned she was surprised she didn't "fall into a damn coma". Manga spoilers like whoa. lol.

I noticed a little slip up grammar-wise during Tsunade's tender moment with Sakura, "I got the chance to see you grow up and stronger." I think it was mostly just a word omission. Didn't catch anything else though, so woohoo!

Alrighty, off to read the next chapter,

-ER-

Oh No!! you left us with such a huge cliffhanger!! I like the way the romance doesn't take away from the plot in your stories.
And yeah I imagine that's exactly how Naruto must be feeling right now!

i love drama and i know things are about to get intense!

Zel,
I really wish that you had written the manga!!Sasuke needs a good butt kicking!

Great job.
Rox

KEEP IT UP! ^_^

Whoa whoa whoa, intense! Good job of showing Sakura's thoughts on the Sasuke thing. I found it quite believable, even the shift that we saw happening right there.

Ha ha, but I feel like I'll be copying you in mine! xD Ha ha! Nah, it'll be different. Great work Zel!

Eldr

A well-written chapter. I enjoyed reading it!

Sakura is showing a lot of backbone in this chapter, and also that she's long past loving Sasuke! Good, because then she can fall in love with Kakashi! lol

So much drama...

Update soon please

great one Zelha, I'd liked very much this chapter, in particular the last part, between Sakura and Naruto. You followed perfectly their way of thinking...and yes, I definitively agree with you; I think Sasuke should have passed for Konoha! I don't like the Danzou's part Kishimoto added in the story! :(

That really kept my attention, and i must say i enjoy the way you write! keep up the god work, and update soon! i must know what happens next!