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Yunique
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
Haha, smexy! I loved this line. “Well, let’s say I wanted my cherry on top.” Cracked me up. =D
In True Meanings
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
OMg this was totally awesome!! Seriously, I've never read anything like it before. KakashixSakura sex is beyond heaven rofl. It's addicting and good. I hope Kakashi will forever love his cherry. lol
Amrun
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
It was exactly as promised -- shameless smut.

Shameless smut is not exactly to my tastes, but it was fine as far shameless smut goes. I liked the beginning with Tsunade. Very cute.

I'm not sure I'm into Kakashi calling her "love" though. It just doesn't seem like something he would do.

Also, Sakura's birthday is March, not May. (Whatever. They're both M months, right?)

Thanks for sharing!
Sakuraangel1327
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
Haha, lied a bit about the age gap there, but it was awesome. XD
inu-babygirl1
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
i luvd this smutty goodness hehehhe please continue making these type of stories great job . hehhehheheheh and u sure succeded im pulling this one off hehhehe if ur competing on the livejournal contest i hope u win withs fic hehehhehehe luv ya INu
Slinkymilinky
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
Zel, that cake was delicious! yumm! great oneshot, I liked the visual of Sakura pushing the toaster into the sink- this is just what I needed for breakfast! good luck in the contest!
Slink. x
roxnroll
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
How could I not enjoy a little bit of Kakashi birthday smut?
I love it!
Rox
Mai Sode no Shirayuki
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Wow *fans self* it definitely was intense! I really liked it and you're such a versatile author. you manage to capture the chemistry of so many different pairings! It's simply amazing! Which is your favourite though?
lol i was very pleasantly surprised when i got the e-mail for this story! Please surprise me again!
thanks :)
Ani
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
That was really nice ^.^ I enjoied it very much.Thank you for sharing this lovely smut!
alifestylechoice
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Zel, you know how to put a smile on my face. <3
Saphri
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Like it? Oh no no no my dear Zelha. Loved it is the term I will use for this marvelous peice of cake.

Oh, and yes, me likes Sakura's pancakes :P

Thank you for such a wonderful peice of smutty goodness, you've made me a very happy Saphy. And some of the things that Sakura liked to do to kakashi are not unlike my own mating habits Kukuku!

Thank you again my darling. You are truly an Angel sent from heaven. *hugs*

Saphri xx
nimblnymph
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
I love Zelha! That be no lie, just like smut cake.

That was DIRTY. And DELICIOUS. And downright DEVIOUS.

If kakashi were real, he'd be having a Gai moment at your generosity right now. And Sakura would probably kill you because she WOULD be walking funny.
sexypancake
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
This was really sexy! Thanks so much for writing. I also hope to maybe see some more Deidara/Sakura from you again soon!
ScaryRei
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Happy Birthday, Kakashi-sensei!
Lovely - absolutely, lusciously, sinfully sexy, yet sweet and fluffy. This cake is no lie!
sayurinomoe
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
eheheh...

I liked the cake. XD
Great work! Score!
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