This is the second or third helping of your writing I've had this evening. I think I harshly criticized you earlier for a dominant/ submissive scene that felt contrived to me, but this is more my liking. Just a subtle yielding of control, back and forth between the two. It seemed very natural and sexy - and I don't watch the show or know the characters!

Always fun to read some Eliot smut. Since it is a pwp, there's no point in talking about plots and some such things. I mean, this side of Eliot is really up to interpretation. In the bedroom context, he can be whoever we want him to be. Yours is... a porn star. ;) Fun read.