That was adorable! Loved the way you described Yangchen's character! There needs to be more fics about her!

That was really good! It's always nice to read a fanfic about characters who aren't as popular.

This is really, really amazing. I can't believe how much you were able to create with how little is known about Yangchen. You even made it incredibly believable. I really loved this.

I like this story - it is very sensitive, and understands the limits of **FAME** and **POWER**, when it comes to the human heart - especially the need for love and closeness. Thank you!

This was nicely done. Very descriptive and the characters were handled well too.

Good job!

Cassie x

Very nice ... we know next to nothing about Yangchen, so it's nice to see she's not rejected by every fan. From what we saw of her, this seems to fit - her situation is rather similar to what Aang's was, and her personality seems to fit with what little we've seen of her. The writing isn't complex, but it's fine enough to have merit. And you created a circle of friends for her - very good.

Also, good work with the names, and characterising everyone.

gODSPEED!