That was the most humorous story ever! I BURST INTO LAUGHTER! MY MOTHER THINKS IM INSANE!

I am so faving this story! I loved it, you capture the twins I think like they would be if they had been given more depth in the movie. The sophistication yet innocence of the twins is brilliant. total props to u dude/ dudette. =)

Of course love makes babies. That's totally how it works.
Great story, real funny.

This was pretty cute. And funny.
I love how they "speak" as well.
Very creative!

yeah that was kinda silly, but it would be just like 3 and 4 to go off on an exploration like that. so chidlike they are, very good, very well done

this is awesome. Totally. You've really got a good thing going here with the twins' personalities and how they're both intelligent and innocent at the same time. it's so cute to read about and their language is very pronounced. ^^ I like this very much.

yay! love makes babies!

SWEET JESUS, I LAUGHED SO HARD. xD Lol, that is just really epically hilarious. xD

XDXD This is awesome XD The twins are just amazing! Very well done ^-^

GO TWINS GO!

imagine that 5 was still alive, and they showed him that.

XD XD or even 6 those two would hide XD

I loved this! I laugh so hard. I liked how 3 and 4 talked to each other, word-wise.

""But these are bipedal animals, 4, and also one of the more superior animals."

"I will be willing to debate that later, seeing how all the humans are dead now.""

LOL, that was clever! Subtle too. Bonus points for you!

9 and 7's reactions were hilarious.

Well hey, this is exactly the kind of thing I came looking for when I logged on to the site today XD
I enjoy your characterization of the twins.

HAVE A COOKIE.

I have a very strong urge to laugh out loud at their interesting little convos (especialy all of the "quite"s and "indeed"s), especially that last one, and very especially the last few sentences, but it's 4:30 a.m. and my sister's in the same room.

Haha, that was very funny! XD Seriously, I'm busting a gut here. Awesome story, even if it is completely random!