   iamgoku 4/26/12 . chapter 6The story rocks you should make a sequel
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| Crystalzap 6/30/11 . chapter 6 cool! Vegeta's goodbye was way unexpected but funny ;) |
| softdreamer 6/13/11 . chapter 6 it's a nice story :)
good work |
| iceandfire66 6/12/10 . chapter 6 This was a really creative idea. You had a good plot and all the characters acted just as they would have. Nice job! |
| xNikoStarrx 6/4/10 . chapter 6 Cuuuuuuuuuute! |
| LadyDisdain 4/14/09 . chapter 6 woow lovely ;) |
| j 1/2/09 . chapter 6 will you please write more of goten & trunks' adventures? with vegeta & bulma on the side? i love your stories! |
| aismaiden17 12/2/07 . chapter 6 this story is nice...keep it up... |
| Jessi Tsuki 3/12/07 . chapter 6 Awesome and sweet. . |
| Twin Tails Speed 12/30/06 . chapter 6 This is a excellent and very interesting story. |
| The Nerd with no Plan for life 5/25/06 . chapter 3 lol! it's halarious! |
| rootbeerdemonGoten 1/8/05 . chapter 6 THis was so kawaii! I loved it!
-Goten |
| Garowyn 7/25/04 . chapter 6 Aw, the whole thing was so sweet. Great work! |
| Kuni W. Brood 8/9/03 . chapter 6 WOW! Vegeta kissing the older bulma? That was unexpected. I really like it. Keep up the good work |
| futagoat02 7/8/03 . chapter 6 this too, was so sweet and kawaii! vegeta... aw... i like it, i absolutely love it!
baibaiyukie |
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