Reviews for The Masterpiece Sandwich

SilentJubilee 2006-06-20 ch 1,	abuseHaha very cute! I liked the ending dialogue. Short and all so sweet. (I love Mayo!)
The Turtle 2006-02-11 ch 1,	abuseThat is the greatest thing I've ever read. That made my soul happy! So damn happy! Wipes a tear away Whew! But, yes, it was awesomness in a box. It kept me laughing from the first sentence. It gets a ten-out-of-ten in my book. Though, you did say, After a few minutes of shuffling and shifting the groceries around, her finally found what he was looking for: the mayo, a brand new jar. You made the same typo twice, but I totally didn't care. Just saying. Awesome story!
mutantspacebrat 2004-02-10 ch 1,	abuseI can just see Bobby and Jubilee fighting with the mayo jar! I read this story last night, and ever since, I've been hungry for mayonnaise.
Furry Elf 2002-10-20 ch 1,	abusehey I've got a cool idea, if u don't mind ideas from insignificant people like myself. can u do a Pietro funny? Or Rogue funny? or both of them together funny? please? pretty please?
Hoodoo 2002-04-02 ch 1,	abuseBwah ha ha ha! Thanks for perking up my day. (Long live sillyfics, the mistreated art form!!)
Arashii Matasuki 2002-01-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was cute. Hey, why didn't they try hitting the bottom of the jar? oh yeah he had the perfect sandwich except he didn't have the key ingredient...meat. Or at least that's what makes the perfect sandwich in my eyes. Ja ne arashii
fuzzyblue 2002-01-09 ch 1,	abuseThat was cute!