 WishfulWhispers 2010-01-02 . chapter 1Ahaha! That's it Ginny, where there's a will, there's a way! Esh Lia, this did make me giggle. Draco's petulance and caustic comments were so in character, it was brilliant.
It must be said, my favourite part had to be the end:
Ginny shook her head and smiled at her mother and then turned to look at her boyfriend whose hand was affectionately squeezing her knee underneath the table.
“Oh, no, Missus Weasley,” he replied with a characteristic smirk beginning to spread across his handsome face. “It's a perfect fit.” -- I think I literally cracked up at that point. Perfect, light humour after all the angst I've been reading and writing. Beautifully done, my dear.
Emma |
 pumpkindarling 2009-10-28 . chapter 1lol love the comedy!
Another great snippet of a very different D/G relationship altogether. A lot of fun! |
 MidnightxRed 2009-09-19 . chapter 1This is brilliant :D
Ginny sure knows how to get what she wants ;D |
 noliolio 2009-09-17 . chapter 1Hahaha I loved it! Great job with characterizing Draco and Ginny :D |
 Boogum 2009-09-16 . chapter 1Hahahaha, that was great! I loved it how Ginny thought "Think like a man", which, of course, leads her to seduce him. LOL!
There were a few typos here and there, but nothing too bad. Other than that, I thought it was brilliant! It made me laugh a lot. ^_^ |
 Melora 2009-09-16 . chapter 1 For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
http:// w w w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student |
 Eternally Seventeen 2009-09-16 . chapter 1Oh, WOW.
That was quite a refreshing read! Hehehe. Loved it...do write more! ^-^ |
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