Awe that so cute

Again, you make putting Connor and Harry together a very interesting combination.

The Destroyer and The Saviour quite fitting, wish you made a multi chapter story out of it though.

I like it. Amazing that you wrote this in 20 mins ;)

what going to happen next

AW! This was so sweet!

Hey, nice bit you got here. I can really see this and I like how much you were able to fit in and show us in all like 800 words? Very nice. Any chance of more?

O.O I think I love you. I was wondering why It was so short till I saw you only had twenty minutes then I started cursing Jinni for not giving you more time. Darn it! But I swore I saw a sequel *rushes off*

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Update asap plz!

Very unique and good, loved it.

ooh. i loved the last line. it sums up both characters so well. and i could most definitely see connor doing that for harry if they were actually brothers. well done.

"He was the Destroyer…Harry was the Saviour."

I love that line. :D

that sounds awesome you should make it into a full story

Wow...that was amazing. I loved the whole 'Conner is Harry's brother'...hope you don't mind if I steal that idea some day. *smiles innocently*

You did that in only 20 minutes? That was GREAT! Although I do have to agree with some of the other reviewers, there is a lot more to this story. You really should consider expanding it into a full (that means long) fic.

Please keep up the excellent work.