 Banner 2009-10-27 . chapter 9This story was nothing but fun. I liked every bit of it. You did a great job keeping the various story lines clear while maintaining your pace. |
 anon. 2009-10-17 . chapter 9 A brilliantly well-writen crossover. |
 Helena 2009-10-02 . chapter 9 Totally awesome, dude! Looking forward to your next story. |
 kirallie 2009-10-02 . chapter 9Poor Remus! And Bill didn't find a silver allergy a bit suspicious? |
 Chanteur d'ombre 2009-10-01 . chapter 9Loved it! Looking forward to the spin-off! |
 Saffygirl 2009-10-01 . chapter 9Lol, awesome story!
Can't wait for the upcoming fic! |
 Chanteur d'ombre 2009-10-01 . chapter 8Poor Remus!!
Loved Dean at the end - kid has his head on straight! |
 Evergreen Sceptre 2009-09-30 . chapter 8haha that Dean sure is scary when he wants to be! It would be interesting to see what Harry or Sam would have dealt with that situation.
Cant one of Remus's postions help in this situation or did Dean not tell Caleb about that becasue if Remus were to 'magicaly' heal when in hospital it might bring up some issues? Oh and isnt there a problem with Rmeus's blood, it could infect anyone who get it in a cut etc? Shouldnt Dean warn them about that? |
 achillies-eel 2009-09-30 . chapter 8LOL DEAN! That's just adorable! And I do love Caleb - he's got to be my favorite of your characters, excluding, like, Dean, Sam, Harry and Joshua? :D
Hmm... I'm guessing that the reason Remus fainted is connected with why he was sneezing so much at the Devil's Gate? Must be silver in the area. Or... is it the gaki?
Which reminds me; is a gaki your invention, or an actual Japanese legend? Because I don't recognize it, and I know-or think i know-most of the Japanese monsters. :) Interesting, in any case.
Hope the boys don't get in any trouble before Caleb gets back at seven! :P
Loving it! More son please? |
 achillies-eel 2009-09-30 . chapter 7Heh, home allergy remedy. Good one, Remus, really good. :P
Thanks for making it so clear! And I even learned a new phrase today... 'catching out'. LOL
HA I love Remus's explanation as to why everyone thinks he 'bats for the other team'. OH that made ma laugh!
I wonder how long Remus is going to be able to convince Bill that he has a silver allergy... and what Bill's reaction will be to him finding out the truth.
Loving it! Moving on! |
 Jimbocous 2009-09-29 . chapter 7Interesting story so far. One thing I didn't get in this chapter, though:
"While Lupin spoke, Bill could see just why it was that the man had been regulated to the boys’ teacher."
Not sure what you were trying to say here. If you intended to say relegated, that has a negative inference that contradicts the implied compliment of the previous sentence.
Anyway, fun stuff so far. Thanks! |
 Helena 2009-09-28 . chapter 7 Another great chapter. I look forward to 8 & 9. |
 Evergreen Sceptre 2009-09-28 . chapter 7wow this is prilliant!
I love this little offshoot i dont think ive read the original version you have written so i will have to check it out ^_^
if Harry is Bad at Languages, what is he good at? If he is as mature as the other two doe she still keep up his education? Why did he have to speak out in latin to be able to tranform into his Animagus form? Is it one of the steps to reach his animal form, do people who learn to transform cast the same spell but silently, its only becasue there capable of silent casting that they dont need to shout out loud?
is Remus sneezes related to the 'Gaki', could he be illergic lol? |
 Saffygirl 2009-09-28 . chapter 7Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update! |
 Saffygirl 2009-09-26 . chapter 6Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update! |