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2009-10-27 . chapter 9
This story was nothing but fun. I liked every bit of it. You did a great job keeping the various story lines clear while maintaining your pace.
anon.
2009-10-17 . chapter 9
A brilliantly well-writen crossover.
Helena
2009-10-02 . chapter 9
Totally awesome, dude! Looking forward to your next story.
kirallie
2009-10-02 . chapter 9
Poor Remus! And Bill didn't find a silver allergy a bit suspicious?
Chanteur d'ombre
2009-10-01 . chapter 9
Loved it! Looking forward to the spin-off!
Saffygirl
2009-10-01 . chapter 9
Lol, awesome story!
Can't wait for the upcoming fic!
Chanteur d'ombre
2009-10-01 . chapter 8
Poor Remus!!

Loved Dean at the end - kid has his head on straight!
Evergreen Sceptre
2009-09-30 . chapter 8
haha that Dean sure is scary when he wants to be! It would be interesting to see what Harry or Sam would have dealt with that situation.

Cant one of Remus's postions help in this situation or did Dean not tell Caleb about that becasue if Remus were to 'magicaly' heal when in hospital it might bring up some issues? Oh and isnt there a problem with Rmeus's blood, it could infect anyone who get it in a cut etc? Shouldnt Dean warn them about that?
achillies-eel
2009-09-30 . chapter 8
LOL DEAN! That's just adorable! And I do love Caleb - he's got to be my favorite of your characters, excluding, like, Dean, Sam, Harry and Joshua? :D

Hmm... I'm guessing that the reason Remus fainted is connected with why he was sneezing so much at the Devil's Gate? Must be silver in the area. Or... is it the gaki?
Which reminds me; is a gaki your invention, or an actual Japanese legend? Because I don't recognize it, and I know-or think i know-most of the Japanese monsters. :) Interesting, in any case.

Hope the boys don't get in any trouble before Caleb gets back at seven! :P

Loving it! More son please?
achillies-eel
2009-09-30 . chapter 7
Heh, home allergy remedy. Good one, Remus, really good. :P

Thanks for making it so clear! And I even learned a new phrase today... 'catching out'. LOL

HA I love Remus's explanation as to why everyone thinks he 'bats for the other team'. OH that made ma laugh!

I wonder how long Remus is going to be able to convince Bill that he has a silver allergy... and what Bill's reaction will be to him finding out the truth.

Loving it! Moving on!
Jimbocous
2009-09-29 . chapter 7
Interesting story so far. One thing I didn't get in this chapter, though:

"While Lupin spoke, Bill could see just why it was that the man had been regulated to the boys’ teacher."

Not sure what you were trying to say here. If you intended to say relegated, that has a negative inference that contradicts the implied compliment of the previous sentence.

Anyway, fun stuff so far. Thanks!
Helena
2009-09-28 . chapter 7
Another great chapter. I look forward to 8 & 9.
Evergreen Sceptre
2009-09-28 . chapter 7
wow this is prilliant!

I love this little offshoot i dont think ive read the original version you have written so i will have to check it out ^_^

if Harry is Bad at Languages, what is he good at? If he is as mature as the other two doe she still keep up his education? Why did he have to speak out in latin to be able to tranform into his Animagus form? Is it one of the steps to reach his animal form, do people who learn to transform cast the same spell but silently, its only becasue there capable of silent casting that they dont need to shout out loud?

is Remus sneezes related to the 'Gaki', could he be illergic lol?
Saffygirl
2009-09-28 . chapter 7
Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!
Saffygirl
2009-09-26 . chapter 6
Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!
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