This last chapter should have had a Mature warning on it. Besides that, you've wrapped up this story on a good night between a husband and wife.

I had no idea of the tension between Alex and her sister. You've done a good job with this story. Keep it up.

Good.

Very enjoyable thanks for the read.

Loved the whole thing. Thank you so much for writing it.

I am a content pixie.

Pix

that it, this is finish already. I really like that and would love to have more. so i ask nicely... Please pretty please can we have more?6

His soul is sown together with hers, never to be torn apart.

My god, what a beautiful line! This should be taught in school. This is what every person in the world wants. Bottle this and sell it and make a fortune! Better yet, write a book, do a tv informercial and make a bigger fortune, lol.

Jeez...what nerve Beth has! Good for Alex and Bobby!

i hate beth she's a jerk i hope alex hits her. she'd deserve it. poor bobby he deserves to have a family to. update soon dying to no wat happens keep up the good work.

I like it. I like it a LOT. You wrote this exactly as I pictured it in my mind after the first chapter. I seriously saw Beth for what she could be.

Then again, I have 7 sisters (I had 2 more who passed on) and 3 brothers, I know what family can ad will do for and to each other, the good and the bad... Big families mean more drama, thats just how it goes.

I hope you didn't think I was flaming you, I was only flaming Beth, your writing is amazing, please continue!

Pix

geez beth! self centered much? great update and loved the interaction b/t beth, alex and bobby! please have more soon!

I guess Bobby's family doesn't have a corner on the market of insanity and dysfunction! The woman is certifiable. I think they need to clear a space for her in Carmel Ridge. I love seeing Bobby protective of his expecting wife and so insightful to how she felt during her surrogacy. More, More, More!

! ##$% Beth! $%%&& *cusses some more* Whew! I was really trying not to say any bad words! What a selfish sister! Oh what a cliffhanger! You definetly have me hooked. Bobby and Alex married with one of their own on the way! How awesome! Please, please, please let Bobby have a little boy of his own. I know everyone gives them a daughter but, I think Bobby would love to have a son of his own to do right by and help erase the past. Can't wait for the next one!

Well, your Elizabeth is quite like I've always pictured her.

I never bought the fact that Eames' family is the happy place most fans think it is. I've always wondered how much pressure the whole family put on her to have her make this choice. Sometimes when relating to her family she seemes to act like a good dependable soldier. It's not difficult to me to think that if Alex really wanted to marry again -with Bobby or another man- her family would be not that happy for her.

So I think your fanfiction cast light on a salient but often neglected aspect of Eames' situation.

awesome start! can't wait to see their reactions when they find out alex's preggers! lol! more soon!