sweet story ,I loved it!but if you can,there is a mistake in in, if you can change wrote "sense" instead of "since" twice towards the end.

woah i love it

nice story...i just hope it was an entire story...i got a question...why do great stories are always one shots...i wish you luck on the contest..

OMG! This was beautiful my dear. Love the beginning and the ending the most...you know how I am about parallelism! haha! P.S. The hater needs to chill. BECAUSE YOU'RE BRILLIANT!

pretty mintage mate :L

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absolutely, 100%, unbelievable perfect! i love it :D

very sweet

Beautiful! :)

I don't know how much more cliche this story can be. Emmett has 2 t's in it.

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