 starjems88 2009-09-22 . chapter 1great story:) |
 smithcrafter 2009-09-22 . chapter 1I liked this, especially the way you had Daniel say the same thing to Jack at the end, that Jack had said to Daniel after Ba'al. |
 bluedragon1836 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Awesome story! Great job showing the different emotions and aftereffects. Nicely, nicely done. |
 Bixata 2009-09-17 . chapter 1Sometimes the one who is trying to help is the one who gets hurt in the process. Then they get to help each other out. Thanks for sharing this, we rarely get to see the emotional impact of their missions once they get home and how they deal with it. And I'll just say it's a good thing that we didn't get to see all of Ba'al's torture methods, because seriously, OUCH! |
 Nyx Ro 2009-09-17 . chapter 1Wonderful! The Hurt/Comfort TPTB denied us to force in the Burke subplot!
Plus, some 'Abyss' resolution. Thanks! :-) |
 PapayaK 2009-09-17 . chapter 1nice angst |
 E. Nagrom 2009-09-17 . chapter 1that was a great chapter/story. I've often wondered what would have taken place if the boys spoke to each other about their experience. That was done in the real daniel/Jack way
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