 xSapphirexRosesxFanx 2010-01-07 . chapter 11nice story, ok, so Mai got more powers and Naru has to figure out her powers or else she'll harm her self. she has to tell him about class what happen. he was so sweet when he slept with her after the attack in her room.
please UPDATE really soon. i really want to read the rest of the chapters.
please UPDATE really soon!
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 Dark Angel Winry Rockbell 2010-01-05 . chapter 11lol |
 christal 2010-01-05 . chapter 11 oh. i'm so excited for the next happenings! please update soon. i love your story! |
 EmeraldStar-goddess 2010-01-05 . chapter 11update again soon! |
 Amu Tsukiyomi 2010-01-04 . chapter 11I have an idea for the title of this case:
He who rocks the boat
Or
They who rock the boat
Or
Unseen barricades
Or
The truth is hidden behind many doors
Or
A portrait for/of murder
Or
Captain calamity
Or
The sharks are circling
That's all of the title ideas I can come up with that could possibly work.
If you use one or more (in future cases) I'd like full credit, please, for giving you the idea. Yes, I saw that you gave credit to the two who gave the idea for the ghostly cruise, but I feel better if I asked for credit.
Amu Tsukiyomi |
 jainga 2010-01-04 . chapter 11You're quite welcome for the case idea! :D
interesting... eithor Mai's acquired Naru's PK ability, or she's gained a ghost that wants to keep her happy...
Can't wait to see where you take the team this time! |
 foxyaoi123 2010-01-04 . chapter 11awesomes |
 EmeraldStar-goddess 2010-01-04 . chapter 10o! update soon! |
 2010-01-03 . chapter 3 i really like keep up the good work |
 girlX901 2010-01-02 . chapter 10Nice i like it. More like LOVE IT! So please update soon! Pretty please with a cherry on top. |
 Kaydreams 2010-01-01 . chapter 10I like idea of a haunted cruise ship. For inspiration you could check out the Queen Elizabeth or Queen Mary. But I'm sure whatever you go with will be an awesome story!! |
 little wing less angel 2009-12-31 . chapter 10i like it... um maybe the next case should be at a mental asylum... and a couple of the patient that have passed are hunting the place... hehehe |
 FallenRaindrops 2009-12-30 . chapter 10An idea for another case? How bout a festival? I'm in the mood for a New Year's festival. :D |
 jainga 2009-12-30 . chapter 10Still liking this...the ghost was frickin' crazy, but some people are like that. Why wouldn't their spirits be just as twisted?
recomendations...?
hmm...haunted cruise ship!
Mai in a bikini during her down time, and the ever frightful possibility of getting pushed overboaed.
Plus can't you just picture Masako getting seasick and ATTEMPTING to hang all over Naru? |
 Dark Angel Winry Rockbell 2009-12-30 . chapter 10:) |