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Guest 3/8/13 . chapter 8 Good job! I really liked it! I'm crying happy tears here! |
krfan 3/10/10 . chapter 8Oh man, i forgot to review. Anyway, it was fun having them give birth at the same time with zeke going back and forth. Glad ryan made it. |
fallinrain 3/6/10 . chapter 8Aww, thanks for the shout-out! I knew about the name, but wasn't expecting that. You're welcome by the way. :) Now. This chapter. This massively epic chapter that I absolutely loved. Felt bad for Kelsi missing Ryan, loved the appearance by Chad, both Sharpay & Kelsi going into labor at the same time, Ryan showing up...yeah, I loved it! Great, great job! |
anothersmallperson 3/6/10 . chapter 8A wonderful end to a wonderful story :D great job! |
digigirl02 3/5/10 . chapter 8I loved it, I liked how Kelsi and Sharpay gave birth the same day and how their moms were able to be there as well. |
rockyshadow 3/5/10 . chapter 8Jen, I love how you wrote all the chaos in this chapter. I'm glad Ryan got back to his family in time and that Sharpay is going to be okay. The talk between Kelsi and Zeke was so sweet and I love how close all four of them are. Chad's part in this chapter was great too. Ryan bringing their mom's was a great idea and I'm glad they were there for both of the girls. I love the names for all the babies also. I'm definitely looking forward to the epilogue. Melanie |
digigirl02 2/13/10 . chapter 7How sweet, I love the speeches Ryan and Kelsi gave at the wedding. |
anothersmallperson 2/13/10 . chapter 7aw such a lovely chapter! Sharpay being bridezilla was so funny. Great job! |
krfan 2/12/10 . chapter 7for a while there i thought she was going into labor prematurely. glad zeke and shar's already married. |
fallinrain 2/12/10 . chapter 7I told you this already, but I loved this! Ryan and Zeke dancing made me giggle and gotta love Sharpay being so stressed out about the wedding. All of the others coming out was great. Scared me a bit with Kelsi, but happy that worked out. Loved her dancing with Zeke and the other guys and the ending was so cute. Great chapter. |
rockyshadow 2/11/10 . chapter 7I love how the whole group is involved in Zekepay's wedding. The teasing between everybody is great. I love what Kelsi said when Sharpay woke them up. Ryelsi are so cute together. I hope Kelsi will be okay, the events in this chapter are making me a little worried. Happy Valentine's Day Melanie from HSM board on FF! |
rockyshadow 1/27/10 . chapter 6I love the way they found out about the sex of their baby. You write both Ryelsi and Zekepay very well and I love to see what the four of them did over the holidays. |
digigirl02 1/27/10 . chapter 6How sweet I loved it, especially the parts when Ryan finds out they are having a son and that Kelsi wanted to name him after his father, and Zeke proposing. Very nicely done. |
fallinrain 1/27/10 . chapter 6Yay, you updated! :-D This was beyond adorable...absolutely loved all of it. Great, great job! |
krfan 1/27/10 . chapter 6i love ryan's gift for kelsi! and sharpay's engagement ring :) |