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green aura
2009-09-24 . chapter 1
Indeed... You left everything here... I mean You left your own feelings for the whole universe... And you did it well... Just as said.. Is not as descriptive as it could be... But it was a nice way to portrait the feelings that we have when we're heartbroken

Who left Lizzie? Is it Gordo? Gordo on Jeep leaving Hillridge? LOL... not a chance... Yet it was nice to read this piece... I'll read someday your stories... And if i have ht eenough motivation and time , I might continue the,... BTW... nice to meet you!

Signs,
Green
Noelle Joi
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
Good story! Captures the feelings of heartbreak very well.
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