 dreaming star 2009-09-25 . chapter 1Wow.
That might have been the best NwP story that I've read in a long time. You captured so much of their dynamic, and it's definitely a plausible bite of their lives. You write so beautifully, too! The way you describe Akira is so real and happy that I can almost see Yamapi waving madly at Kame in my mind. I loved Nobuta's presence in the Akira-Shuuji-Nobuta BFF trio, and I loved that Shuuji narrated it all, the way that he has completely accepted all of Akira and knows him so amazingly well.
And Jerry's Ent!
I loved it so much--it definitely brought a smile to my face after a long day. Thanks for writing and sharing it! |