can you continue?

Oh, I love this... Are you going to continue it?

I want to see more "All hail Emperor Lelouch!"

I say Lelouch x Kallen.

I have actually noticed that Lelouch x Kallen works best with rewrite stories.

Lelouch x C.C. works best with Lelouch surviving the Zero Requiem and becoming immortal.

aw another cliffhanger! (claws at the ground) PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON I CANT WAIT! And poor lulu! all the stuff thats happened to him... *sniffle*

the second chapter was even better in my opinion. im trying to not sound like one of those people who just say all good things no matter what but i honestly cant find anything wrong in this story...excellent work! and good job of keeping lulu in character, too. its really hard to keep him in character hes just so awesome and hard to figure out. also i love the lulu and shirley pairing so thats great if youll use it! i think that not enough people are into that pairing, no pressure though...(gets crowd of millions to anxiously await her desicion) heehee i spoke too son... (:) just kidding :) i like the lulu and CC and the lulu and kallen too...

this story is great so far. its so suspenceful too! definately going on my favorites...anyway must read on...

If you do decide on a couple, I like C. .

Update soon!

This looks good!

Hey, great story/chapter! Personaly, I"m a Kalulu fan all the way, though I won't mind if you do C. (as long as they're in character and not OOC mushy(XD).\

I think Kalulu is an awesome couple, and the best stories I've seen on Fanfic are Kalulu(at least, the majority of them are really well-written-then again, I haven't read many C. , if none at all. Lol)

If you do do C. , please dont' bash Kallen(I hate that).

Anyway... Overall, great story, can't wait to see more.

E101

P.S.-I think you might get a lot of C. reviews, considering the fact that it's a major fanbase coupling (I still can't see them as more than accomplises, but whatever. _)

I think you should do A couple. In my opinion they were the best pairing. Please post more soon. I wanna see what happens next!

Apart from some typos, it's good. Try to get someone to beta read for you.

At least you gave the boy a chance at normal high school life, albeit royalty style. Lelouch suffered a great deal, even became evil for the good of everyone, so this is a very nice and original AU setting.

You are doing just fine with the casts in character except Lelouch. Probably this normal teenage life could soften his character a bit, however, old habits die hard. He may be caring and conscientious but he's damn proud and stubborn.

As for the couples, I ship Lelouch x C.C. Most ladies from CG are true beauties but "The Witch and the Warlock" look best together. Period.

I wonder how the rest of the story will be, but as a reader, I will really appreciate if you emphasize on character development.

Good luck!

About the OOC, yeah they are, specially when Lelouch isn't in true control of things. About couple I prefer LuluC.C. all the way !

I think Kallen is too heated, physically strong and very different from Lelouch. I never understand how to associate her with Lelouch...

And Shirley well, her uber crush is somehow annoying or good romance and well, she doesn't really match Lelouch. At the same time she is better and worse than Lelouch/Kallen Couple.

So LuluC.C forever !

Good story so far.

In my opinion I prefer Kallen and Lelouch as a couple. Kallen hadn't really got too much of a chance to have personal time with Lelouch because of her imprisonment and the betrayal. After all...She is his Q-1.

C.C. just seems like just a really good friend to me in truth. She can't die with a smile if she watches Lelouch age away anyways.

As for Shirly, she just has a one-sided crush and she's annoying. Not to mention that that is what got her killed in the first place

This is really good, I can't wait to read more of it. Update soon.

Ciao!

PS: Put him with C.C.

Yeah the only problem I see is that they don't seem to be in their character but each chapter your improving on certain aspects and hopefully the next chapter will be even better than this one ..loved C.C's rom's description tho xD