|Reviews for Turning over a new Leaf|
| shadowr2d2kirby 4/26/13 . chapter 1
PLEEEEEEEEEEASE DON'T DISCONTINUE THIS STORY
| Garner4444 3/25/13 . chapter 5
Moves: thunderpunch, thundershock, charm, tail whip
Can gold get ALAN? please?!
| leumas797 3/5/13 . chapter 1
Great so far but I am going to say this I know the Pokemon there are from sinnoh but wouldn't it be perfectly symbolic if the Pokemon gold bonded with was a cubone? Any who know the background details know about cubone's mother
| UniCryin 10/31/12 . chapter 7
Great story! :D I really like this one, so please update! :)
| HgSpartan 6/27/12 . chapter 7
I really like this fic, its good quality and has a cool story, can't wait for more!
| sharkpedofromverpets 4/25/12 . chapter 7
Awww, I WANT MORE!,MOAR! i stayed up till 12.00 AU time AND have school today! JUST to read this story... MOAR!
| Eeveesin98 2/24/12 . chapter 7
Great f-ing amazing story! Shame you ditched it though...
| Eeveesin98 2/23/12 . chapter 3
2 words... Great story!
| ghostie200011 2/11/12 . chapter 7
YOUR STORY IS SO FANTASTIC! I find it kinda interesting though that you named your totdile Raven when I named Silver Raven when I first met him in game. Also, the room #26 they stayed in which is incidentally one of my fav. numbers. You wouldn't happen to know the reason behind these coincidences, would you ?
Preamble aside, I very much like your characterizations of your... well... characters. Geez, not much help here, am I? But I do like your take on silver. It's very easy to make him one-sided and not-being-weak-centric, and you didn't do this, instead making a very deep and intriguing character. I feel like we'll keep learning more about him, and am excited about what new chapters will reveal!
I like the reborn concept, also with the beginning adding a layer of mystery to the whole story that keeps curiosity piqued. I honestly have no theories about who killed her so far, which means that you're doing a good job of not being obvious.
I also love your take on mew. I'm sure that he(?) could be that crazy if you ever got into a conversation with him(?). You can tell by the way he flits about like that...
I actually like your decision to give this story some darker themes, espically the near-horrific context of Wolf's death. I love it when pokemon stories aren't all rainbows and lollipops and allow for the issues that would certainly exist in the pokemon world. This decision gives your story a realistic feel which I would imagine would be difficult to create in such a far-out world as this one.
I'm sad that I missed the time to submit OCs, but I'll keep an eye out on your stories from here on out and ideally won't miss the oppertunity again!
Thank-you so much for helping one kid forget that she has the flu for a few hours while entertaining her profoundly. I look forward to what you write in the future!
| Arthas972 1/7/12 . chapter 7
Lol, I'm really starting to like this story. Shelley's got nothing on Chi.
So, when's the next chapter coming out?
| Hawktalonthemedicinecat 8/5/11 . chapter 4
Oh and the oc I sent had a problem with his bulb opening so he got an everstone stuck in it so he cant evolve...I just realized how dumb that sounded.
| Hawktalonthemedicinecat 8/5/11 . chapter 3
Personality: Nice, clumsy[as in fall off cliff], HYPER
Oddities: Redish color
| PoKeLoVeR 7/3/11 . chapter 4
I love the story I was wondering if I could have a OC in the story I kinda have it thought out feel free to modify to fit the story I have no problem with that
Nickname: Sammy, Sam
Species: Once Human/Pikachu
Personality: Quiet, Intellegent, Somewhat Cold, Distant, but completely innocent and fights hard to protect those she cares for
Like: Napping, Berries, Going for Walks, Climbing Trees, Sweets of any kind
Dislikes: Overly Hot Weather, Spicy Foods
History: Samantha lived in the Johto region with her father in Azalea Town, because her mother passed away. Her father constricted her to the house because she was deadly ill and dying slowly, she later befriended a Slowpoke and would sneak out to play with it, and her father found out and killed the Slowpoke. She died a few days later where she was reborn as a Pikachu
I don't know who her trainer would be but it can be anyone I don't care much, if its Gold or Silver or if she stays wild and meets Chi some time later on. Thanks I hope she's a good character
| ExplainableChaos 4/26/11 . chapter 7
Update this story! I know that by now, looking at the date it was last updated this is a year late but I think this story has fantastic potential and if you just re read then maybe you will get the spark and start writing for this story again. I would even help if you would let me.
In all however the story is amazing however the reborn stuff isn't all new to me so don't mind me saying that the characters of the reborn were pretty easy to find out and if you do continue try and advance the story geographically wise as i got kind of bored with violet town.
As I said please update and i will be happy to help if you email/pm me.
| Shay the Pokemon Trainer 4/19/11 . chapter 7
I love this fanfic sooo much! Please right chapter 8! :D