That was the most touching beautiful short story ever !

Hehehehehe, Shikamaru and Temari. I love it. They're so the perfect couple. I wish the TV series would do this. *pout* Guess we can't have everything we wish for.*sigh* In the Nara's most famous line "How troublesome". lol

Thanks for the story, I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!

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You know, I have a feeling that this would probably be how Shikamaru would end up starting a relationship anyways. I mean, years of repressed emotions probably doesn't do a body good until they are finally released. Any who, great job. Nicely written with little dialogue. It was great.

yeah only a little OOC

but very sweet nonetheless

i liked how you wrote from his father's perspective, i thought that gave the story a nice feel

nice story, hope to see more ShikaTema from you :)

the epicness of this fic amazes me. ttly love it

well yeah, if anyone knows what fear is, it would be temari. cause of like ya know when gaara was all psycho. but ya it wasn't really fluff though because this has a plot to it and was based off a plot. fluff doesn't have plot whatsoever. BUT...IT WAS GREAT! *adds to faves*

Aww thank was beautiful

This was cute and fluffy! Nice idea and yeah, they were a bit OOC, but not a lot. This was good though and I liked it :3