This is a really neat idea. It would be interesting if you continued it. Still, it's an excellent oneshot as well. ^^

--E.A.

Kinda loved it. With the love that multiples after the last line which was just SO UTTERLY perfect. :)

Woah... Ciel got an attitude change!

I think you're writing style is kinda like mine in a way o__o Never straight to the point lol..and confusing xD But yours is in a good way of course~

Me likey, never really imagined something like this happening. Good job! Keep writing ^^

Interesting idea. :O I really like...it was confusing at first, but it was so awesome as it progressed. ;D AMAZING!