Good story...I never did like Appledehli he was just stupid...

*sniff* and to think Ed left the Bebop to go to that loser...

What a 'jerk' Appledehli is! I'm not too sure is jerk the right word but oh well, I just hope not all father is like that, just how am I to know when I don't have one anymore, oh well! I like the way how Ed shout at him, he deserve it!

Nice job. I can imagine Edward is a difficult character to write for but you gave her depth and heart without sacrificing the essence of Ed, which was your goal. One small gripe: SPIKE DIES? I just started watching this show about a month ago on Adult Swim and have become totally engrossed. Sh*t, that's depressing. Oh well. Easy come, easy go.

::sniff:: wah... that was so good, i cried when i rad the 1st ch, i've always wondered about ed and ein and what happened to them, than you for providing a possible, and wonderful, ending the CB!

Methinks Mr. Appledehli has short term memory problems! That's my theory anyway.

Bebop's ending left a lot to individual viewers' imaginations, and this isn't the scenario for Ed (and Ein) that I envisioned, but I enjoyed seeing this take on it, too. There are many fanfics out there dealing with the aftermath to the final two(or three, in this case) episodes, and I hope there's always room for one more (because I'm writing some).

I'm glad Ed didn't ditch Ein. Never trust a guy who doesn't like dogs! (Come to think of it, Spike never liked dogs, but I like him. Hmmm...)

Sublime. I don't like giving out easy reviews but this is very good. Ed talking in a non-idiotic way is kind of depressing. One gripe is that Ed's father should be a little more spacey (believe me thats his nature). This captures Ed's situations well. Kudos.

Oh!That was so sad! Very good. I had a little trouble picturing a dog crying. But hey, it's Ein. Really sweet. Great job!

*sniff* Loved it. *cry*

;_; Poower Edward.. you did a really goods job of keeping her character. Yay! .

The writing is a bit abrupt, but you did a great job of keeping everyone in character. Ed's parting line to her "father-person" is WONDERFUL.

A very delightful vignette. You kept everyone, even Ed's father, in character. I can see him not understanding the kind of life his daughter's led for the past seven years without him. Kudos.