I just read all the reviews and I have to say that all those people/person that bad mouth you are/is ignorant. Yes, you have bad grammar but so what? Everyone does. English is my second languages too and I understand your story. Keep up the good work.

Love, ko.

(For those of you that keep talking crap about the author, I will forever be flipping you off.)

hey i like how the story is goin :p so u shud write sum more please! hehe _

please write more please

Alright I'm going to say this ONCE for anyone who is going to read the reviews after posting degrading crap as a review. Stuff it. I'm American I read it I write it. I make grammar mistakes all the time as does anyone else. Anyone who tells you that they write perfectly is either lying or goes over their stuff hundreds of times. I have a hard enough time making sure everything I write comes out readable.

You writing is great I like the story. I didn't see the last two twists coming and I can't wait to see how they play out.

Here's some advise you can take it or leave it. People who flame stories like this are usually just jealous because their stories aren't as good or don't get as many reviews. Take it as a complement. You do have some grammer errors but their minor and can easaly be read over and the ones that can't I was able to figure out. English is hard no matter who you are I think your doing great so keep up.

Post soon

hugs and puppies

Dude, I haven't read your fic yet b/c it's late and I'm just bookmarking it for later. But all those anonymous unsigned-in posters with nasty things to say are likely all the same person, or at least mostly the same person. How very rude to be mean to no real purpose or help. Talk about a waste of time. They don't have to read anything that "offends" them, and you can easily find worse things on the net than bad grammar.

English IS one of the hardest languages to learn, 'cause we borrow from so many other languages it's such a mix of pronunciation, for one thing. Anyone who gives you crap-not constructive criticism but just a bad time of it-is an a-hole so just ignore them.

I just wanted to say keep working, you can only improve. And I'll be back to read later.

I have just finished the first chapter of this story and read your comments at the bottom. I didn't read the review that offended you, but I just wanted to say that I was really impressed when I learned that English is your second language. I have only ever tried learning a few languages and am not good in any of them, and I know how hard it is. For someone who is writing something in another language, this was amazing! Any errors that did appear did not take away from the story at all. I am really enjoying this story. Thank you for writing it!

...wow, so it's a genetic trait to deal with demons? Kouko and Trey get it from their father? also... the way you made this story i feel like Reino cares the most for her and she get her! why! T_T IM A HUGE REN X KYOUKO WHY AM I DOUBTING WHO SHE SHOULD BE WITH! ITS ALL YOUR FAULT! Making Reino all cute and everything... but i still want you to update and let me see how this all plays out...

Just saying... English is one of the hardest languages in the world, and a few mistakes never hurt anyone. In fact, the fact that u used ur time to write this should be thanked. Good job (:

It's really a weird story, but I kinda like the things you make Reino do. And at first, I thought your grammar really sucked, but it seems that 1) I saw great improvment in this fic than another one I read; 2) it's a weird grammar problem that you have. I don't want to offend you in any way, but you're the first person that I've read to write like that. At first, I was wondering if this was some American dialect (because the mistakes are mostly made when it comes to vocabulary), and then you said that you weren't an English native, just like me. I'm curious to know from which country you are, so I'll check on your profile page. Just so you know, your grammar doesn't make your story bad. I really like what you write, and the words you mispell are easily recognizable if spoken out loud (and in fact, there's not that many of them. I've read other people that had terrible grammar just because they're not paying attention and it sucks. That's not your case, obviously).

I laughed a bit when I saw how you wrote the word 'Wight' (which is actually white), because I'm always having a hard time with this word when I write it. Would you like me to make a short list of most of the words you mispell and give you the right spelling, or you don't really care about that and I'm just being a pain here ?

And I hope by now you're out of hospital, all healthy again.

Well, I've said what I wanted to say, so I'll stop here, after repeating that I like the way you write and your story (not all of it, but most of it anyway).

Good luck with your next chapter!

this is an interesting twist to the story. i hope you get around to updating the next chapter really soon.

Hey there. Are you sick of hearing almost all of your reviewers whine about your bad grammar yet? I only read the last page, and I have to say that by the fifth reviewer I was pretty much nauseated. Just saying "Your grammar sucks, get a beta reader, and don't be so lazy when it comes to learning a second language! English is easy!" is beyond harsh. There's a difference between being helpful and giving criticism designed to make you a better writer, and being nasty just for the sake of being nasty. I love how you're being the bigger person here, perhaps you are not the best writer when it comes to English spelling and grammar, but with time and hard work you can and will improve, while they will most likely all be immature snots for the rest of their lives.

It is true that your grammar could use some work but learning and mastering a second language is tough, especially English, which just so you know, is actually commonly known as one of the hardest languages to learn because of it's intricate grammar and large vocabulary. If anyone says otherwise, tell them that I, NeonChandelier, an English-speaking Canadian, knows many intelligent bilingual people, and has been told by each and every one of them that English is probably the most difficult language to master, even by native speakers. Mandarin, to my knowledge is the easiest to learn, and even that is beyond tricky.

If you WOULD like a beta reader, but don't feel like having to wade through the full hundred people that are already telling you (wrongly) how much you suck, then I would be happy to help you by beta-ing any previous or future chapters of this story.

Personally, I find that you have an interesting plot line that is taking many unexpected turns, even so early in this story, and the fact that it is so far fetched just makes it that much more unique; I can assure you that no one else has posted a story like this anywhere for this fandom, and you've added your own feel towards the characters which could have totally backfired, but seems to be working just fine for you.

So, good job on your story, and write back to me if you would like some help or friendly advice.

(By the way, if you don't mind me asking, what is your native language?)

You have about as much potential as a monocellular organism.

I'm so disappointed with this story. It is like a child trying to use a more grown up language to sound more like an adult, only to fail miserably at it.

oh my gosh! :) its so sweet and cute! i love it! please update soon.

forever LOLing at you with friends and some beer.